Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Family Dynamics - Part VII

Thursday, March 9, 2006

River is back at school and not much has changed. Kaylee and Inara spring into action and things get worse for Mal, Zoe, Jayne and Wash. A little Simon/Kaylee thrown in for good measure. Not too much action yet, but it's on the way!

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River was cold. Her skin held a fine layer of perspiration that chilled as soon as it rose to the surface. The air in the room around her was freezing on purpose; they wanted her to be uncomfortable. Her lips had turned blue and her face white and she was shivering. But River wasn’t sure if she would say she was uncomfortable. River wasn’t sure if she was anything.

It had been six hours and forty-seven minutes since she had been taken from the front foyer of her home. Since she had seen Simon knocked unconscious, with a small trickle of blood falling from the reopened wound on the back of his head. Since her father had told her everything would fine; since he had told her she was going back to school where she could be with her friends and learn. Since her father had told her lies to make himself feel better. Since she had started to again feel real pain.

The physical pain she had been confronted with at the Academy had not really changed since she’d started there almost three years ago. Truth be told, the tactics were all a little rudimentary. First it was sensory deprivation: darkened rooms, white noise; then it moved on to climate variants: too hot or too cold, like now. Then they would branch out into weapons and tools. Sharp objects, blunt objects, hard objects, soft objects; gases, drugs, fire, needles; it would run the gamut of sensory and pain experiences. River had known that from the moment she’d known the soldiers would take her. The physical pain was something she could prepare for and although her body would give out under the strain eventually, she could withstand for longer than most of their other subjects. Which made her their favorite guinea pig. Because not only could they devise new ways to torture her body, but while she was alert, they could find new ways to torture her mind.

That was something they had improved upon, even in the year she’d been away. They had of course, immediately opened her skull, probing into her brain with their tools, severing synapses and overexposing

Comments
Thursday, 09 March 2006 04:35
Ohh most excellent chapter. I did have to laugh at the showing Simon's father a good time comment. hee

Glad that it was Kaylee and Inara that did the rescuing. And the touching moment between Simon and kaylee was just lovely. I do hope you have lots more of those!

But now who will rescue River? Poor girl is going to be more traumatized than before!
Thursday, 09 March 2006 04:37

>I did have to laugh at the showing Simon's father a good time comment. hee

I'm glad. That's what I was going for. I have to admit, even I find the idea of Simon's father with a companion hi-larious. Thanks for the feedback!
Thursday, 09 March 2006 04:44
BRILLIANT!... poor poor river, she is so fragile. And the Kaylee/Simon moment was perfect. LOVE IT!
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 09 March 2006 06:00
Oh God, I hope River's alright!

Poor, poor injured Simon. I love the brief moment of tenderness shared between him and Kaylee. It was so perfectly written, as always!

Update soon!

~Wanmei~
Thursday, 09 March 2006 10:05
Just loving this series. I too loved the Simon comment about his father, definitely Simon's wit. Poor River! I can't wait to see how they rescue her, if she doesn't do it herself! Excellent chapter and can't wait for your next post!
Thursday, 09 March 2006 10:35
This series is great although I'm quite worried about River. Looking forward to the next part!
Sunday, 12 March 2006 12:11
Love it.
Wednesday, 07 June 2006 18:31
The pain and torture prescription goes double for the bastards hurting River.

Yet another good line:

*“I certainly hope you showed my father a good time.”*

I have to stop reading now to go home from wok, hopefully I can continue this wonderful story very very soon.
Friday, 24 November 2006 03:37
Yea! Kaylee and Inara seem to have rescued Simon and you even managed some Silee moments. Now all you have to do is save River, and make sure Mal recovers from the fit he throws when he finds out about these dashing heroics. Of course I'm sure they'll be more angst betwixt here and there, but that's part of the fun.

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