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The helm of serenity.

Tuesday, March 7, 2006

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The helm of serenity.

River is our new pilot on serenity.

River takes over the co-pilot's station on and flies the ship under the watchful eye of Mal.

“River, do you know that the first rule are when are flyer a ship in the air. Said Mal.”

“I do….. But I what like to hear it from you, Cap’in Daddy’. said River.”

“River. Do you wanna hear it, said Mal.”

“Okay, River. The first rule is you must feel love, when you are flying, if you don’t know how to fly a ship and don’t know how to steer bye feeling love for Serenity and other ship like this.----------- We are gonna crash by it. Because if our pilot don’t feel love for the ship. They don’t know by it and I won't anyone to fly this ship not if they don’t feel love for my ship or in the end for the crew.”

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plase Feelback

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 07 March 2006 09:29
"Cap'in Daddy"?

This is the greatest fanfic I have ever perused in the width and breadth of my long life. I have read many fanfics; I have travelled far across the landscape of fiction, in search of perfection.

And now I have found it; my Ambrosia.

Cheers!
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 07 March 2006 14:45
No need for sarcasm, anonymous.
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 07 March 2006 15:23
Who's being sarcastic?
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 07 March 2006 22:37
Please learn to use quotation marks.

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