Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Ballad Of Jayne

Monday, March 1, 2004

A Jayne/River romance set a couple months after OiS.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 7071    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer: Characters do not belong to me, they are the property of Joss Whedon, Mutant Enemy and Fox

I posted on FanFiction.net a couple weeks ago, finally got around to posting it here as well. It is actually my second fanfic but the first one I am still not happy with. It's a Jayne/River romance type thing.

Feedback is MOST welcome.

Many thanks to L.A.Guns, since I shamelessly stole the title for this piece from them.

It takes place about a year after Ariel...a couple months after OiS.

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Jayne sat on his bunk, looking down at the white box sitting in his hands. It was the box his Ma had sent him his new hat in a couple months back, though that was not what sat in it now. Jayne reached out gingerly and ran a fingertip lightly over the soft fabric inside, remembering the first time he'd seen them sittin' in that shop window back home....home, he hadn't let himself think much on that place in years. He closed his eyes and let himself remember her and all that lead up to his leaven' for the first time since he'd flown off that rock.

Jayne had known her most of his life, Megan was the daughter of the Magistrate Jayne's family had been indentured too. He'd been a fair man, bit harsh at times but all things considerin' Jayne knew his family had been lucky. He'd seen more men take undue advantage of their indentured servants in the years since he'd left then not. His Pa had died in a mining accident when Jayne was 11. Jayne, being the oldest, had taken Pa's place in the mines working off the family's debt. Least Magistrate Anders had been a fair enough man that only one of them had to work the mines for him, most places the whole family would'a been working off the debt. Ma would'a done it but there had been young'ns needed looking out for and their little plot of land to take care of, so Jayne had left off his schooling and gone to work. It was hard, back-breaking work haulin'

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 01 March 2004 02:28
Great! Gotta say though, River making Jayne speechless is the best
Monday, 01 March 2004 10:16
Well done, I wasn't sure how this would work out but you made a beautiful gorram job of it! Loved it. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 01 March 2004 19:03
This was really sweet, and very well written. I really liked the background on Jayne's history, it really fits well with how his character acts.

Thanks very much for this :)
Thursday, 04 March 2004 17:43
That was lovely... I really like the way you show a "softer" side of Jayne.

The only thing I didn't like was that it had to end!!!

Thank you!
Saturday, 27 March 2004 03:59
very sweet and romantic, I have to say that I am definitely starting to get into the idea of the River/Jayne ship!
Thank you!
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 01 April 2004 18:48
amazing ... thank you for sharing your creativity!
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 14 April 2004 01:20
Wow. I always like it when someone manages to expand Jayne's character. Jayne, along with Shepherd Book, was the character I wanted to see "grow up" most on the show.

thank you.
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 29 July 2004 07:39
wonderful characterizations, you got Jayne DOWN i love the story, very sweet
JAZMYN
Saturday, 05 February 2005 05:47
that was so kool and great
i love it u have to make more plz
it is so good and the doc and jayne r finly getting along
that is so kool
jazz
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 25 May 2005 19:43
Just beautiful. I'm new at reading these stories and can't tell you how much I'm enjoying them. You had Jayne's voice perfect and my favorite line? "I'll be in Jayne's bunk."

Hot and steamy and just plain fantastic. Thanks for sharing.

Patti
Thursday, 06 October 2005 05:10
I really hope they do get together, thanks for taking the time to write this. Put a smile on my face.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 23 December 2005 04:01
I loved it.
Saturday, 20 September 2008 17:42
Wow!! That was amazing.
Please, write more!

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