Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Family Dynamics - Part IV

Sunday, March 5, 2006

The crew searches for Simon and River. Simon and River wake up. Action with angst.

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“Any idea where we should start looking, sir?”

Mal had been waiting for Zoe to voice the question since they’d left the ship. He’d known it was coming, because he didn’t have an answer. “Not rightly, no,” he answered, hurriedly crossing the street away from the docking port and heading back into the center of town. “But if something untoward happened to the doc and his sister, two guesses who’d know about it.”

“Cortez.” It was a statement not a question.

“Exactly,” Mal grimaced, glancing behind to be sure his second was keeping up. Matching his stride, Mal told her, “I’m thinking we need to pay that rat another visit.”

***

As Cortez watched one his men fly across the bar’s back room, he sat back with bemusement and waited to see who his assailant was. When it turned out to be Reynolds his bemusement quickly turned into suspicion. Serenity’s Captain did not have a reputation for launching much larger men across rooms. It wasn’t in his nature which meant something was terribly wrong.

When Mal and his second-in-command, Zoe, rounded the corner to take up wide stances in front of him, Cortez crossed his arms over his chest and eyed them both. Reynolds was mad, seething actually. The warrior woman was as unflappable as ever.

“Problem,” Cortez asked, flicking his gaze to his man who was slowly getting up and back to Mal.

“Maybe,” Mal answered, stepping closer. Resting his fists on the table, he leaned forward and brought his face right into the other man’s. “Depends on what you know and how much of it you tell me.”

“Know about what?” Cortez wasn’t much for game playing.

“My doctor and his sister get pinched off my boat, while I was picking up cargo for you,” Mal told him, his voice losing none of its edge. “You know anything about that?”

Cortez was almost disappointed. Sighing heavily, he stood and crossed the room to pour himself a drink. “Kidnapping, Mal, really? You came here to accuse me of kidnapping?”

“Don’t act so offended,” Mal bit out, again

Comments
Sunday, 05 March 2006 03:59
AHHHH! Where's Simon?!?

Glad that papa Tam finally saw how mentally unstable his daughter really is!

Kaylee's convo with Inara was heartwrenching.

Excellent work. Waiting impatiently on the next chapter.
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 05 March 2006 04:10
Another brilliant chapter!

I hope Simon's alright and I hope he can comfort River in the next chapter, the poor thing seems terrified to death!

Excellent work, please continue soon!

~Wanmei (too lazy to log in)~
JESSCLIFTON
Sunday, 05 March 2006 06:48
This story is so awesome! Can't wait to read more :)
Monday, 06 March 2006 08:31
I want to know where Simon is as well! This story is getting a bit nail biting, and I am so loving it! Hands of blue are looming around the corner and I can't wait to see what's in store for the rest of the crew! Great Job! Please post soon!
Monday, 06 March 2006 20:09
Thanks to all for the great comments. Part V is proving a mite difficult so hang tight. I expect to have it posted by mid-week.

Leiasky, I love your work so thanks for the vote of confidence. I'm glad you thought I captured the Kaylee/Inara tone well. I was little worried the convo might be a bit unnecessary, but I think it's important for us to see Kaylee pretty much freakin' out. Especially over Simon, whome she obviously carries such a torch for!
Wednesday, 08 March 2006 03:31
Aww, I hate it when Kaylee's sad, but I love this story
Wednesday, 07 June 2006 17:30
Excellent line:

*And now they lived in a house called Serenity. And River was homesick.*

Sterns needs to die a slow painful death.
Friday, 24 November 2006 02:55
Your writing makes me really miss Firefly. You've nailed the Mal/Zoe interactions and the scene with Kaylee and Inara broke my heart.

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