Blue Sun Room FICTION - DRAMA

Finding Our Way - Chapter 9

Sunday, March 5, 2006

Mal finally confronts Simon about finding him with Kaylee and things don't go at all like he had planned. Kaylee/Simon. This chapter is quite angsty. Well, I think so anyway.

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My beta said she cried her eyes out when she read this. Well, I hope you do too. :)

Last chapter for a while. Hope you enjoy it.

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Chapter 9

Dinner was a loud boisterous affair. Everyone was pleasantly pleased and surprised that nothing had gone wrong with this delivery either. Jayne was still snuffling disgustingly, but he was doing better now that the puppies were gone. Mal had surprisingly said nothing about finding Kaylee in Simon’s lap in the lounge which kept Simon tense and on edge for the entire day.

But right in the middle of dinner, Mal turned stern eyes on Simon and in no uncertain terms asked the date of the wedding.

A horrified look passed across Simon’s face but Mal kept his face stoic and his eyes hard.

Simon swallowed hard. “Wedding?”

“Ya, you wanna bed my mechanic, you do it all legal like.”

“I don’t –“ Simon glanced from the shocked Kaylee back to Mal. He shook his head. No one was going to tell him when and how to propose marriage. As angry as he was at that moment, he didn’t even look at Kaylee – something he was about to regret – but instead leveled as hateful a gaze as anyone had ever seen at Mal. “No. I will not ask Kaylee to marry me simply because you have a problem with –”

“Truth comes out. No big surprise. You rich boys like to use ‘em and leave ‘em.”

“That is –“ Simon was distracted by Kaylee, who stood, eyes filling with tears. Simon’s eyes shifted from her to Mal and back again, unsure of where to direct his full attention. “Not – Kaylee –“ He reached for her but she stepped away from him.

“No big shock that you don’t want to marry her.”

“Not right now, no.” Simon stammered. His mind wasn’t working well with Mal’s unfair barrage and he knew instantly that he’d said the wrong thing.

Wash and Zoe’s pained looks gave him some form of comfort. They’d gone through a similar tirade before their marriage. It was no secret Mal hated shipboard relationships.

Simon reached out to Kaylee again, knowing he needed to exp

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 05 March 2006 01:36
I had a big case of the "Uh oh"'s when I read Mal's questions and accusations at Simon, especially how I knew it was hurting Kaylee to hear it. But WOW on Simon's reply to Mal, he really stomped the guy and I think after hearing that Kaylee's hurt will be patched up :) GREAT CHAPTER, CONTINUE!!!

~ misskitten
Sunday, 05 March 2006 01:49
Gah! Bad Mal! No dessert! Please let Inara's retribution be swift, humiliating, and public.

But kudos to Simon for sticking up for himself. He gets rather eloquent when he has nothing to lose.


Sunday, 05 March 2006 01:54
PLEASE write more soon, this made me teary!
Sunday, 05 March 2006 01:55
This can't be it for a while - you can't leave us hanging here!

I loved the entire interplay. All of Simon's words, to the captain, to Inara, resonated so well. You really captured him. I can't wait to read what he says to Kaylee when Inara finally "lets" the two of them be together. I know it's for their own good - but jeez!

And Mal should feel guilty! Ruttin' idiot. But I know somehow he'll make it right. Please post again soon. This deliciously written angst has left me wanting more!
Sunday, 05 March 2006 02:07
Mal is a big giant Ass! I hope he can fix it.
Sunday, 05 March 2006 02:43
Captain Dummy strikes again. *sigh* At least he got put in his place.

Whaddaya mean last chapter for a while? That ain't right...
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 05 March 2006 05:23
OH MY GOSH I have fallen in love with this story!!!!
Sunday, 05 March 2006 08:02
I need this to live. Please, please update soon? (And don't make it too sad, I don't like it when things are sad.)
Sunday, 05 March 2006 17:38
Please more, this the best story I've seen in a while. Good, gods holy heaven, hell, and earth, Mal is a jackass.
Sunday, 05 March 2006 19:02
Okay, loved this!!! Mal needs to have the snot beaten out of him! Cannot wait for Kaylee to go see Simon, I have a feeling that might happen(I hope!)and go ahead, bring on the angst, I can take it! Waiting patiently for your next post!
Wednesday, 08 March 2006 03:41
Take THAT Reynolds!
Awesome!
JAILBIRD
Friday, 21 April 2006 02:08
Ooooh this is by far the best I've seen. I am sooooooo stealing it, dong ma.
Friday, 26 May 2006 13:45
Mal can be such an ass. Good for everyone else, not offering their support after the stuff he said.

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