Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Finding Our Way - Chapter 3

Thursday, March 2, 2006

Simon finally makes a move and a myserious woman approaches him with a job. Simon/Kaylee w/ hints of Mal/Inara.

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Chapter 3

“All she wanted tonight was a dance. For you to look at her and see –“

His eyes left hers as he searched Kaylee out of the crowd. Not proper when dancing with a lady, but he knew Inara would understand. He couldn’t even remember what she was wearing. River had dominated his attention from the moment she’d launched herself off the cargo bay stairs and into his arms.

Inara saw the worry and the humiliation flicker in his eyes and felt sorry for him. She knew he and Kaylee had been growing closer; albeit painfully slowly for the eager mechanic. She leaned closer to him and whispered the mechanic’s general location and the color of her dress.

They continued to dance, missing not one step as their eyes searched for different people within the crowd.

Inara was pleased to see Mal sitting with River, trying in vain to engage her in a normal conversation. So, she felt, rather than saw, when Simon had finally found Kaylee. His sharp intake of breath and the tension in his body were just two immediate indications that he was pleased with what he saw.

“She’s – she’s beautiful.”

“Yes, she is.” Inara tore her eyes from Mal and followed Simon’s. “She was so proud to look like a lady for you tonight.”

Inara felt hum gulp nervously and then look away as the dance steps dictated they change direction. “She doesn’t need to –“

“Simon,” Inara squeezed his hand. “When it comes to you, she wants to be perfect.”

“Ai ya, Inara.” Simon shook his head, exhaling deeply. “She is. She – already is.” He always wondered why it was so much easier to talk to anyone else about Kaylee but couldn’t manage to tell her how he felt.

There was hope for him yet, and Inara’s heart swelled at the thought. It was time for a more direct approach. Kaylee could hurt her later. “Then perhaps you should tell her that. Because if I have to listen to her cry her eyes out over you one more night, I might just convince the Captain to kick you out the airlock after all.”

Simon’s eyes twitched as he caught the all-t

Comments
Thursday, 02 March 2006 17:58
Oooh, this is getting REALLY good! *wink, nudge* Like where it's headed.
Thursday, 02 March 2006 18:18
Thanks for ending it there! Please post the next chap ASAP! I can't wait to see where this story is going! Great Job! I love that Simon is finally a bit more comfortable with Kaylee in a setting that is like "his world".
Thursday, 02 March 2006 18:21
Still love this story to death and I just know I'll keep on loving it in future chapters!

Keep posting these!
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 02 March 2006 18:29
ooooo, keep posting these *please* :D Why do I have the feeling that the lady *might* know a little something about who Simon really is :P
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 02 March 2006 18:31
last post was by me, misskitten :P
Thursday, 02 March 2006 19:40
Wow, speedy posting. And I'm oh so grateful for it!
FUNKYINFISHNET
Thursday, 02 March 2006 22:14
I'm really enjoying this story, you write the characters really well. I love how Inara threatened Simon, it made me giggle. I also hope to see more developing Mal/Inara as you write them so well. Simon/Kaylee is wonderful! Keep it up :- )
Thursday, 02 March 2006 22:23
Going to try and answer a bunch of people in this post :)

>Wow, speedy posting. And I'm oh so grateful for it!

The story is done. All 107 pages of it. I'm just posting one or two chapters a day.

>Why do I have the feeling that the lady *might* know a little something about who Simon really is :P

Boy is that an understatement.... :)

>I'm really enjoying this story, you write the characters really well.

I don't think I get them all down all the time but I do try. Thanks for mentioning it.

>I love how Inara threatened Simon, it made me giggle.

Well, I tend to think she's nearly as frustrated as Kaylee at this point. And she really wants Kaylee to be happy.

>I also hope to see more developing Mal/Inara as you write them so well.

They do have some more interaction throughout the story.

>Simon/Kaylee is wonderful!

This story is really about them so they will feature prominently. Glad you like 'em.
Friday, 03 March 2006 21:32
Been away for a couple of days and just catching up. This is yummy. I always thought Simon would be in his element at a fancy party. I'll bet he can handle a sword as well!
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 08 May 2006 05:31
(piff)

This is getting really good. Such a sweet chapter...River getting to dance, so excited then Kaylee getting her wish and Inara seeing her happy. Cute! Ah..sweet sweet fluff.
Friday, 26 May 2006 12:20
Yay for all of the dancing (and double yay for being right about Mal and River).

Kaylee is going to make herself sick on the strawberries.

*suddenly very Kaylee-filled evening*

I like that, a lot.
Friday, 24 November 2006 08:06
just listened to the waltz you mentioned, and its such a lovely choice! I can see what you meant by "intimate," it's a very beautifully romantic piece! I've decided to read the chapter again while listening to it! :D Well done, and I hope to read much more soon!

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