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Family Dynamics - Part II

Wednesday, March 1, 2006

Simon and River's father will not be deterred that easily and Kaylee wants to know what she can do. Simon/Kaylee. River. Inara.

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When Mal, Zoe and Jayne arrived back on board the silence on the ship was deafening. Completely unsettled by the lack of activity, Mal left his second and the merc to stow the mule and wandered up the stairs and into the common area. Seeing it empty, he turned and headed for the engine room. “Kaylee?”

Entering the warm room, he didn’t see her at first, but a small whimper gave her away. Mal turned with a start to see his mechanic huddled in her hammock, shaking with quiet sobs.

Leaping to a whole bunch of conclusions, none of them good, Mal stepped forward and placed a gentle hand on her shoulder. Jumping at the touch, Kaylee snapped her head up and looked at her captain through tear-filled eyes. “Oh, hey cap’n,” she managed to blubber, wiping her face, but to no avail. The girl had been crying for a while. “How’d the job go?”

“I’m not so worried about the job, lil’ Kaylee, as I am about you,” Mal told her. Pulling up a stool, he sat at her side and took a hold of her hand. “What happened? Are you hurt?”

She shook her head slowly and looked as if she might start sobbing again. Mal steeled himself for the inevitable wailing. He didn’t like it when women cried, but seeing those big tears run down Kaylee’s cheeks froze his blood. A girl like her, with a smile as big as the ‘verse and a heart to match, should never have to cry.

“Tell me what’s going on, Kaylee,” Mal warned her quietly. “Or I’ll find that {worthless piece of crap} doctor and make him tell me.”

Judging by Kaylee’s reaction to the mention of Simon, Mal guessed he’d been right. This was about that dandy of a boy. Gorramit if Mal didn’t like shipboard relations.

“It’s not Simon’s fault, cap’n,” Kaylee told him, sitting forward a bit and squeezing his hand. “He didn’t do nothin’. How could he know his dad would be on Ariel? He didn’t think he’d actually ever find ‘em.”

“What a minute,” Mal said quickly, rising. “Simon’s dad was here? On the ship?”

Kaylee nodded, biting her lip to keep in her sobs, her eyes wid

Comments
Wednesday, 01 March 2006 05:00
Yay, S/K made up! Now, what is Gabriel planning...hmmm....
Wednesday, 01 March 2006 05:04
WOW!What an enexpected ending. I feel very priveledged to be the first to comment on such an amazing line. Keep it up, you rock!
Wednesday, 01 March 2006 05:06
That was very good, TamSibling! I absolutely love how this is moving along, your characterization is excellent and the whole dynamic just seems perfectly on par.

The ending was SUCH a cliffhanger! I can't wait to read your next installment!
Wednesday, 01 March 2006 06:27
Can't wait to see where this leads up to! Nice chapter development!
Wednesday, 01 March 2006 12:13
I knew that hwoondan (hope i spelt that right) couldn't be trusted!
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 01 March 2006 12:23
Another great chapter, can't wait to see what happens next. Hope they can find the tracer soon.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 01 March 2006 17:41
Thanks again for the feedback. Any thoughts on the characterization of Simon/Kaylee pre-BDM? I was struggling with where exactly their relationship would be considering they haven't really "done" anything yet.

Also, I realize I'm skating a fine line with River, but her craziness can be convenient - it can explain away inconsistency!

Thanks again, stay tuned for the next installment ...
Wednesday, 01 March 2006 17:42
That was me, up there! Foul computer!

TamSibiling
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 04 March 2006 01:05
love it, flows so well with the story. Fine, work! Looking for more!
Wednesday, 07 June 2006 16:59
Wonderful River line:

*“I’m not a gorram cow. You can’t pay for me and keep me on a leash.”*

*“No silly, our real daddy.”*

I always felt that in 'Safe' when River said that daddy would get them and take them home that she was referring to Mal.

Another good line:

*Simon was a wonderful and brilliant doctor, but a total ass when it came to woman.*

I do not like the sound of this line, though I know you will bring it to an exciting place, wherever it goes:

*Simon would need someone to look after him once she was gone.*

What a bastard Gbe is being, setting the goons of this mysterious man on his own children.
Friday, 24 November 2006 02:41
Gave me chills reading this esp. considering how it ended. I do take issue with River watching her brother with a detached eye pondering Simon's life after she's gone, considering how close they are and how emotional they've been acting now that their father's shown up.

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