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Firefly: "The Race"

Monday, February 27, 2006

Episode 3 in my second season of Firefly: The crew of Serenity finally take a vacation on a pleasure world. Things look fine, until they uncover a plot that threatens Inara's friend, and are forced to enter Serenity into a race to save her.

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Firefly: "The Race"

Disclaimer: If I weren't just a poor college student and could finance the series myself, I would, but I can't. So all I can do is just play around in Joss Whedon's 'verse. Also, I don't know a lick of Chinese so I haven't bothered to put the translations because they're probably horribly wrong. If it were Japanese or Latin, well, that'd be another story...

Episode 3 in my second season of Firefly: The crew of Serenity finally take a vacation on a pleasure world. Things look fine, until they uncover a plot that threatens Inara's friend, and are forced to enter Serenity into a race to save her.

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Captain Malcolm Reynolds stepped up onto the flight deck of his Firefly-class transport, Serenity. Kyo Nagiama, the ship's pilot and an old war buddy, sat in the pilot's chair. He was steering very lazily, with a slouched posture and one hand at the dip in the U-shaped control yoke. Wasn't Mal's way of flying, but he knew Kyo could snap alert in an instant.

"How're we doin'?" Mal asked Kyo, bracing himself on the upper bulkhead and the back of Kyo's chair. Rather than looking at the scopes himself, he choose to peer out into the black of space, which wasn't so black at the moment. Three planets were rapidly growing larger in their field of vision, spread out in a loose sort of triangle, with a moon swaying uncertainly in the center thanks to the gravitational pull of the three large planets.

"Smooth," said Kyo, reaching out with his left hand to turn on the Cortex connection. Mal looked down at the round, green screen as information flickered across it. "There were three Alliance cruisers in the area, but they got called off on an emergency signal."

Mal's jaw involuntarily clenched as he looked at the Chinese characters that scrolled by the screen. Ever since Wu Yo a few days back, Mal had an increasing dread of Alliance warships in orbit. It was one thing to know that Alliance played by the rules, but in the last few months th

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ANONYMOUS
Monday, 27 February 2006 02:18
Nice story so far. very easy to get caught up in it.

I do think Simon's intimacy issues are a bit over the top..what with him having no problem doin' it in the engine room at the end of the movie.
ANA
Monday, 27 February 2006 05:02
Oh yeah, I'm getting some *serious* Star Wars homage-vibes here. Not that there's anything wrong with that, of course. Unless you put in Jar-Jar. Then I might take issue. ;)

Simon's 'intimacy issues' were always a bit over the top. That's who he is. That doesn't mean he *never* has moments when he relaxes. The beginning of "Objects in Space" illustrated that quite clearly. As for the engine room, well, they'd both had a near-death experience and had spent almost a year repressing their feelings. I'm surprised they didn't consummate in the kitchen!

The race was choreographed very well. I know zip about how any of it would actually work, but hey, it made sense. And it was exciting.

I love how Kyo finally said the hell with it and let River in. It has to be scary to know someone is seeing you so completely. If they work past each others' hang-ups, they will be a sight to see. I, for one, am already rubbing my hands together in glee.
Monday, 27 February 2006 10:34
Yeah, I tried explaining Simon's intimacy issues in his dialogue with Kaylee. Even after the engine room at the end of the movie, he's still trapped in his fine, Core-world breeding. There's just certain conventions he's been taught to follow through, and has conformed to all his life. It's just a little jarring to break from that convention.

And thanks for saying the race was choreographed very well, Ana. Figuring out how to explain those things can be headbashingly hard. Won't have to wait too long on River and Kyo, if things turn out how I've planned. And you don't have to worry about Jar-Jar popping up neither, haha.
Monday, 27 February 2006 19:53
Personally I'm glad you cut the fancy dinner scene. It seemed to fit nicely in passing but might have overdone the conflict between Kyo and Simon if you'd written out the whole thing. Nicely done!

There's a lot going on in the background here that's very interesting. You're really setting yourself up for some excellent episodes later in the series.

Loving Hex, he fits the 'verse well.

Keep writing!
Taya
Tuesday, 28 February 2006 08:54
Thanks for comment. I do hope that I've built up enough for later episodes. Don't want my well to run dry.
Saturday, 11 March 2006 01:39
I KNEW Hex would be coming with them! the MINUTE it was mentioned he put people at ease my brain just SCREAMED at me
"REPLACEMENT FOR BOOK! REPLACEMENT FOR BOOK!"
Glad to see I was right. Hex seems cool. Maybe not QUITE as cool as Kyo, but then again Kyo has lots of simmilitarities to various favorite characters over the years.
Oh yeah, and Zoe getting the killing shots was GREAT! and...and...and...

wow. Love how much this whole thing reads like real eposodes. Now, I'd best be goin' but I plan on movin' on to Eposode 4 real soon.
Tuesday, 14 March 2006 10:14
Haha, yeah, I thought Hex might be an obvious replacement for Book. Hex'll hang around in the background some while I work out everyone else's arcs, but I'm hoping he'll remain cool.

And thanks for saying they read like real episodes.
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 27 March 2006 20:58
well they do
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 15 April 2006 11:28
i love you sis

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