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Firefly: "Eden-Two"

Monday, February 27, 2006

Episode two of my second season of Firefly: After completing a job on Beaumonde, Mal runs into a man he helped during the war. The man, weary of the hard life after the war, is searching for the fabled planet Eden-Two. Unfortunately, he isn't the only one.

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Firefly: "Eden-Two"

Disclaimer: If I weren't just a poor college student and could finance the series myself, I would, but I can't. So all I can do is just play around in Joss Whedon's 'verse. Also, I don't know a lick of Chinese so I haven't bothered to put the translations because they're probably horribly wrong. If it were Japanese or Latin, well, that'd be another story...

Episode two of my second season of Firefly: After completing a job on Beaumonde, Mal runs into a man he helped during the war. The man, weary of the hard life after the war, is searching for the fabled planet Eden-Two. Unfortunately, he isn't the only one.

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Captain Malcolm Reynolds dusted his hands off pleasantly as he finished up loading some of the cargo they'd be transporting on to Beaumonde. Kyo Nagiama, their new pilot and old friend, busied himself by working on the Mule as it remained parked on the roof Serenity. That meant a series of complicated harnesses to keep him hanging up in the air, which wasn't exactly Mal's idea of a good time.

"Doin' all right there, Kyo?" asked Mal, leaning against the crate he'd just loaded. Kyo dropped his hands from the underside of the Mule to look through the olive netting that supported him.

"Shiny," he smirked before reaching over to remove a tool from the box that was tied to the ridiculously high hammock.

"Don't be seein' the need to be messin' with the Mule," grumbled Jayne Cobb as he dragged two crates into the cargo bay of Serenity. "Better'n these here horses."

"Now, now, ain't no need to be takin' your frustrations out on them fine creatures," said Mal with an easy grin. He reached out and patted the strong neck of a brown stallion that stood to his right. Reminded Mal of his ranching days back on Shadow. Back there they hadn't a whole lot of A.T.V. transports to haul things, and so they mostly had to make due with wagons and horses.

"Don't be blamin' me neither," called out Kyo from above, who'd since returned to his

Comments
ANA
Monday, 27 February 2006 03:10
Brilliant, awesome, wonderful, yadda yadda yadda...

So glad to hear there'll be a heckuva lot of more of these. Don't apologize for the "OC" being in the spotlight. As Kaylee would say, "It's shiny meeting new people!" I'm a glutton for characterization. I can't get enough of it.
Monday, 27 February 2006 08:24
Oh...this fic is all manner of shiny, GeekUSA!

I really have to give ya props for creating an OC that doesn't feel all contrived for being with the BDHs. I would find it hard to create a character that could integrate themselvers into the "family" as Kyo has.

P.S. I remember watching Captain Power and the Soliders of the Future when I was a youngin! Wasn't that bad of show for what it was ;)

BEB
Monday, 27 February 2006 10:19
Thanks for saying you all enjoy Kyo. It's more nerve wracking to introduce a new character, I think, than to worry about capturing the essence of established characters. Mostly because OCs are you're very own creation, and I think you want them to be loved more. Which explains why a lot of fanfics have OCs as the invincible sort.

And BlueEyedBrigadier: You used to watch Captain Power? Shiny! I rarely meet people who do. I just ordered the fanmade DVD from CaptainPower.com and look forward to getting lost in nostalgia when it arrives.
Monday, 27 February 2006 18:50
Oooh more mysterious characters and ominous events.
Enjoying this lots.

Taya
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 28 February 2006 01:21
Wow wow wow....thank you for the great show...need any references to go into the screenplay business?
Tuesday, 28 February 2006 08:47
Haha I could use some references, sure.
Wednesday, 01 March 2006 23:47
wow. Wow again. and I love Kyo! and I love how this series is going and I only wish I had the time to sit and read all of the next two in one shot. sadly, I don't. But don't worry...they WILL get read!
Tuesday, 13 June 2006 06:22
I LIKED IT! not quite what I was expecting, but that just made it better. I have two little questions/points that everyone will probably curse me for bringing up, since there pretty minor, but here goes nothin'. First, The Peacemaker. I know there was Colt Peacemaker, but that was an old .45 calliber single action revolver in the late 1800's and early 1900'. So, I'm guessing that Kyo's gun is of newer design,since even now most .50 cals only hold 5 shots. Just out of curiosity, did you base it on an existing pistol or is it your own design? Also, you mentioned a .33 caliber semi-auto pistol. I don't know anywhere near as much about guns as Jayne, but to the extent of my knowledge no one makes a .33 caliber semi-auto. There is a .32 caliber and my personal favorite a .380 (My dad used to have a Bursa Thunder .380 semi-auto. It was such a great gun. If ever work in law enforcement, I'm getting one those and gun like Kyo's Peacemaker.)Just wondering.

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