Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Damnit Simon

Saturday, February 25, 2006

Yes ladies and gentlement, pigs are flying, misskitten is writing SMUT! Started out a different take of a sceene in OiS, but it grew out of porportions. Rated NC-17 for sexual content. And oh yeah, it's Simon/Kaylee, but you allready guessed that right?

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4626    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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AN: Okay, this was originally planned to be just a short story. But as I started writing, the characters just wouldn't stop yapping in my head. LOL, it's TRUE! Originally written just to do something about one specific sceene, it just grew out of porportions.

AN2: Yes, ladies and gentlemen, pigs are flying, misskitten is writing SMUT! Now, this is important, I want comments, especially about the smut part, if I'm ever to dare do another one of these I need to know whether or not I'm on the right track, 'kay? But for goodness sake comment the other stuff as well... lol

AN3: For all of you worrying about when it is the next Hangover installment is coming. I'm working on it, Kaylee's chapter's almost finished, and I've started on both Inara's and Zoe's. The last mentioned is the one you should be on the look-out for. I can't say when, but there's definate progress. Plus I've just finished my exam, so there won't be that demanding schoolwork for the next couple of weeks, so I should have more energy to write.

Edit: Thanks to EA for the Beta-ing!

"Damnit Simon"

It had to be late afternoon. Though time measurement didn't completely hold out in the black, they were all used to living on central time, just for the sake of order with both work and meals. Kaylee pondered about tripping into the kitchen and grab a snack or something, but being the social creature she was, eating alone just didn't appeal much to her. Besides it wasn't as though she was insanely hungry or anything. Her next query was whether or not to take the trip to her bunk to get washed up. She looked at her hands. They were only slightly grimy. Her clothes were pretty grimeless also, except for her sandals, which she had managed to step into a spill of oil she had made when treating a minor screetching sound from the engine turning.

She washed off her hands and the oil from her sandals, which now were too wet to use. Her working boots were right down in her bunk, but she wasn't too tempted to

Comments
Saturday, 25 February 2006 22:25
I like this story. I was always curious about how Simon and Kaylee started talking at the beginning of OiS. And the smut was well written.

Keep it up. Finish off the "Hangover" series so that we can see the twins again.
Sunday, 26 February 2006 00:15
It's a great story, a good way to slip a little extra scene in there, but the copious spelling errors made reading it very choppy. I suggest a beta reader.
Sunday, 26 February 2006 00:50
Very nice. I love the scenes you added in between the parts we saw of the episode.

The sex was well written (do write more, will ya?!:) and I love that she took the initiative and just pushed him against the wall to get him to kiss her the first time.

And I love that her anguish over telling Jubal where River was didn't last past that day. She and Simon had it worked out before he even left the infirmary.

Sweet and tender and I hope you write more quickly.
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 26 February 2006 01:11
Hahahahahaha. The title alone made me read it (and porn never hurts). Well done.

ManicGiraffe
Sunday, 26 February 2006 04:44
OOOOOOOooooOO! *squeee* SMUT with PLOT??? Now there's an anomaly! I loved it! It was lengthy too, but no problem since I'll always read anything you write. Just the whole time I was reading this..I was like..Ive never heard of Smut with Plot! LOL :P It was Awesome! :D :D :D Hey Frell! You have competition!
Sunday, 26 February 2006 07:32
Alllllssooo...Rereading it..LOL Cause it's that good...Liked this line-

""A icy chill went down her spine, tears started to dwell in her eyes. This couldn't be happening. It was hers to give, not his to take. Hers to give, and only Simon was allowed to...""
Sunday, 26 February 2006 13:01
Kaylee's story sounds familiar... Oh, right, it's in 'pretty, pretty' isn't it. I was trying to place that for ages!

Well written!
Monday, 27 February 2006 19:45
Loved it, doll. And SQUEE! You wrote smut! Really GOOD smut, too!
Wednesday, 01 March 2006 12:35
Shiny, love the refrences to the pretty fics.

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