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Appearances - Part 7 (Final Chapter)

Thursday, February 23, 2006

Simon and Kaylee are in more danger, Mal and Inara are in unfamiliar territory and River lives up to the title BDH.

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This is the last part of my first multi-chapter fanfic. Feedback is shiny and let me know if the last paragraph makes sense. I was trying to be clever, so the good lord only knows if it worked. Thanks to all for your great comments!

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Mal couldn’t remember the last time he had been this content. It was the honest truth; he had tried over the past week to wrack his brain for the memory and every time a good one came floating to the surface, he realized it paled in comparison.

Rolling over with a sigh, he came face to face with Inara’s sleeping form. Reaching out a gentle hand he stroked the side of her face gently trying his best not to wake her. Although if she awoke, then they could … but no, Mal would wait for another chance to physically express how much he loved this woman.

Not that they had been at a loss for intimacy since leaving the ship. They had attempted to venture out of the hotel suite he had rented a few times, but each effort failed miserably and within an hour they were back in the room, tearing each other’s clothes off and begging the other not to stop.

But it was more than that, at least it was to Mal. It was being close to another human being. He had never had that, not with a woman. Sure, he was close to Zoe, had shared things with her he had never and could never share with Inara, and while he loved Zoe, he felt a myriad of other emotions for the young woman lying next to him. Love, warmth, safety, comfort, joy, sadness, happiness – it was all there, the entire package and he had finally woken up to see it.

He was still tracing a gentle line along her cheek bone when her eyes fluttered open to meet his gaze. She smiled at him and brought up a hand to grab his, kissing his palm and snuggling closer. Mal wrapped his arms around her and sighed again, more content then the moment before. He knew eventually they would have to emerge from this room and go back to the ship and the real world that awaited them. But they would steer there way through those waters when

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 23 February 2006 04:58
Brilliant last chapter! Thank God things turned out! I loved this series, you must write another soon!

~Wanmei~
Thursday, 23 February 2006 07:46
Excellent! It was very fitting that River kicked seven barrels out of that rotten Marcus and his idiot crew and I loved her comment to the Captain that she didn't take orders very well. Loved Inara and Mal finally being together and River drawing pictures of them and of Kaylee and Simon with a baby carriage was shiny! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 23 February 2006 09:36
A very shiny little series... thank you
Thursday, 23 February 2006 10:58
Yes, shiny series and very enjoyable read. :D
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 23 February 2006 13:46
awwww on the last drawing, made me grin like a moonbrain :D
~ misskitten
FUNKYINFISHNET
Thursday, 23 February 2006 16:06
Absolutely gorgeous chapter with a wonderful ending. I adored it. I hope you write more. Keep it up coz you're very talented :- )
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 24 February 2006 21:51
This entire series was wonderful! PLEASE write a sequel!!!! I want to see weddings and babies!
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 28 February 2006 09:23
excellent excellent excellent!!!!! more please!!!!!
Tuesday, 28 February 2006 12:26
I love happy endings.
Tuesday, 28 March 2006 17:24
“”Nara, that’s wonderful. Well, I mean, I’m glad that …” Pulling back to look at her he said, “Is there any statement I can make right now that won’t get me slapped?”
hehe, i love it! and awwwwwwwwwwwwww, at the drawings. so shiny!!

b
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 15 April 2006 21:19
Why does everyone make Inara cry at every little damn thing?! She's stronger than that.
MCK
Friday, 05 May 2006 18:09
I have to agree about the crying thing. I surely don't recall either Inara or Kaylee crying so much. Especially not Inara.
Wednesday, 24 May 2006 22:39
Ohh, Simon beatings and reunions. . . ahh, gotta love it. River's drawing. Hah. So who had the baby and the wedding first? Kaylee or Inara? :)
Wednesday, 07 June 2006 15:49
Mmmmm, yay for Mal and Inara gettin it on.

Double yay for River kicking ass.

Yay for babies and weddings and such, on to your other stories. :)
Sunday, 10 June 2007 14:24
Love the last paragraph, and the wonderfully happy ending!

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