Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

She's Missing

Sunday, February 19, 2006

River has a dream about the girl she used to be.

Disclaimer: I do not own Firefly, Serenity, or any of the crew. Though I wish I did.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2211    RATING: 7.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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In her dream she danced. Twirling and twirling, gracefully maneuvering her body around the room. A small smile played across River’s lips as she lay on the catwalk above the cargo bay, feeling the cold metal of the deck plates on her arms and leg’s. Although her eyes were open she was dreaming. She was seeing everything that she wanted to see. Nothing cold, nothing scary. River saw a normal girl, smiling brightly and looking absolutely carefree. She saw the person that she used to be, that she hoped was somewhere locked away inside. It was the person that no one had seen since she’d left for the Academy.

“She’s missing,” River said quietly to herself. Still in her halfway lucid state she heard footsteps approaching. Too caught up in the daydream she was having, River continued to talk unthinkingly. “She went away to a new place and somewhere in the time there she was taken. They took parts of her and replaced them with something else. Something that wasn’t her, that didn’t belong to her. ” The young girl’s deep brown eyes were coated with a glaze of tears as the dream she had been having seemed to just dissolve away to nothing, leaving her body feeling empty and cold.

Trying to ignore the hurt and blankness that he could hear in River’s voice, Mal stood where he was at the top of the stairs in silence for a moment. He sighed quietly and shook his head as he started walking again. River blinked finally and glanced in the direction Mal was walking from, before she put her head back down and brought her finger’s up, twirling her hair in a child-like manner.

“Hey there, little one.” Mal said as he stopped in front of her, bending down slightly to see if she was okay. River knew he was going to act like he hadn’t heard what she was saying, and he would pass it off as if he didn’t really care. She moved her eyes from where they were rested and looked up at the Captain for a moment.

“No need to feel sorry for her, she’ll be fine. And she’s there, in my daydreams. Maybe they’ll find her one day, still int

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 19 February 2006 23:26
interesting...
Sunday, 19 February 2006 23:32
Heh, I hope that's not a bad interesting.
Sunday, 19 February 2006 23:53
The description is beautiful :D Enjoyable read!
Sunday, 19 February 2006 23:54
*blushes* Why, thank you. This is my first peice of Freifly fanfic ever.
Monday, 20 February 2006 01:33
I liked it, kinda sad, wistful and hopeful all at the same time.
Monday, 20 February 2006 03:13
BEE DEE!!! ITS GOOD!!! Stop sayin its not CUZ IT IS!!!!!

lol Admit it you boob!!!
Wednesday, 22 February 2006 02:43
BeautifulDisaster, that was awesome! You brought tears to my eyes. :( Good ones. I sooo want to thank you for this! I usually never read fanfic, as it invariably ends up with River in a, well, tacky ship of sorts. And I really do not care for that at all. ShadowChild was kind enough to point me to yours, though, and said it would be safe. And I trust her. :)

You did good; very good. You captured the essence of River, her innocence, and you did a beautiful thing with it. "She's missing." Even saying it makes me feel like crying again. If only more people would write like you! I could stand to hear a little more. :)

People who write about River this way deserve a special level of Heaven. :)
Thursday, 23 March 2006 17:43
i second the special level of heaven nomination...

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ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 26 March 2006 18:59
I really loved this fic. It had a sad but hopeful tone about how River is and thinks. And I second the special level of heaven nomination:)
MCQ
Wednesday, 10 May 2006 21:25
I liked that a lot. That really captures River and what may be going on in her mind. Nicely done! :)
Wednesday, 10 May 2006 21:27
This was really kinda beautiful

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