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Appearances - Part 3

Monday, February 13, 2006

Okay, this probably going to be more of a six-parter. I underestimated by verbose-ness.

The crew goes for help and Inara enters the picture. Mal/Inara - finally!

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Inara waited on the Med Center’s landing platform with the grace of a rhino. She had alternated between pacing the length of the deck and biting her nails – she never bit her nails. But couple the return of Mal to her life with Kaylee’s illness and patience was something she had in short supply.

She wished the thought of seeing Mal again didn’t have this effect on her, but she had learned long ago that wishes rarely, if ever, came true.

She heard the distant pop and echo of a ship breaking through the upper atmosphere, and she turned toward the noise, raising her hand to shield her eyes from the rising sun. While it took a full five minutes for Serenity to come into view, she tracked it from the moment she looked to the sky. The ship was as familiar to her as any home, any city, any planet she had every visited and she could picture it just as clearly whether it was in or out of sight.

The rusty exterior looked slightly worse for wear as the firefly transport settled to the platform. Over the whine of the ship’s fading engines, she heard the clang of a door behind her and turned to see Doctor Bernard limp onto the platform. The man was older, easily pushing seventy, but his skill and wit didn’t suffer for it. He was a bent man, his spine having long ago lost the battle with gravity, but his features were alive and his eyes held a spark that Inara had always found mischievous and comforting. He came to stand beside her now in silence. She had already briefed him and he knew what to expect. Inara wished she did.

As the ramp lowered to the deck it was Mal, of course, who came striding down first, River following in his shadow as she was prone to do these days. The two of them had formed somewhat of symbiotic relationship, especially since Wash’s death. The added time the young girl spent on the bridge meant prolonged periods of close proximity to the captain, and Inara secretly wondered if anything Mal thought or felt was hidden from the psychic. She guessed it wasn’t something Mal liked

Comments
LONEWOLF7
Monday, 13 February 2006 05:07
very good. awaiting your next installment
Monday, 13 February 2006 05:25
I've been wracking my brains for what could be wrong with dear Kaylee since I read the first chapter and I've got some ideas, but I'll keep my mouth shut cause I'm pretty sure I'm wrong lol, it's probably a lot more simple than what I'm thinking.

Another magnificent installment, I can't wait to read more!
Monday, 13 February 2006 09:32
Oooooooo!! Mal and Inara yay!!! Finally some action between them! More soon! :D
Monday, 13 February 2006 12:25
At last Mal and Inara have stopped dancing around each other, just hope it lasts. As for Kaylee, what the good gorram is wrong with her? Didn't like the greedy cockroaches at the end discussing the bounty on our BDHs. It never goes smooth. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 13 February 2006 13:23
Loved your Mal/Inara scene it worked really well.
I too have some theories about Kaylee's illness and would love to know if i'm right!

Keep it coming.
Taya
FUNKYINFISHNET
Monday, 13 February 2006 15:47
Really great story. I'm loving the Mal/Inara - esp in this chapter! Sure hope they find out what's wrong with Kaylee. Keep it up :- )
TAMFAN
Monday, 13 February 2006 20:26
Mal & Inara and Simon & Kaylee - can it get it better?

I hope Simon and this other doctor figure out what's wrong with Kaylee soon.
2X2
Monday, 13 February 2006 21:13
Wonderful Mal/Inara scene... is it wrong of me to say I'd trade places with either of them in a second <evil grin>... Love Mal tellin' Inara that they shouldn't ruin it with talkin'... good idea, that... at least let them get a foundation going, before the razor sharp comments start flying again :o)

Poor Kaylee... What the gui is wrong with her?!!!!
Thursday, 16 February 2006 17:09
aaww....that was very sweet. what the heck's wrong with kaylee?

i can't wait to find out. poor simon. i do feel for him.

great job! now, i'm going to read the last chapter you have posted.

i hope the next one is coming out soon =)!
Saturday, 25 February 2006 20:27
yay!!! *does dance of joy* mal and inara! mal and inara!

b
Friday, 26 May 2006 18:45
*gasp* OH NO!!! my big damn heros...

they best be okay or i might have to... have to... send you an email *her shoulders deflate as she realizes her lack of actual threats*
Wednesday, 07 June 2006 13:33
The pinyin in the last story may not be right, still looking into translators.

Loved this line:
*It’s me, remember; Mal? The guy who can take you from fine to furious in 2.8 seconds. Who do you think you’re foolin’?*

Yay in fact for all of the Mal/Inara interaction.

Good suspenseful ending again, Marcus getting the local sheriff involved with his quest for revenge.
Tuesday, 24 April 2007 19:02
Oh, sonofa... Blast that Marcus, the wretched hump! *shakes fist*

Poor Simon. He's gonna wear himself out, I can tell. And as for the Mal/Inara interaction - lovely! It made me go all bibbldy in a happy-shipper-way. =D

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