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Appearances - Part 2

Monday, February 13, 2006

Kaylee's condition worsens and Simon gets desperate. Mal and Inara have a moment too, I promise.

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It had been three days since Kaylee had collapsed in the field. Simon had been in to town a half dozen times, talking with the local doctor, healers, mystics, anyone who might have some kind of medical knowledge. Every day he came back with another option, crazier than the last, and every day his heart sank when the latest technique didn’t work.

Somehow Mal had managed to hold off Marcus, telling the impatient smuggler that the ship was having some sort of problem and they would need to postpone the job. Simon hadn’t asked for many details and the captain hadn’t volunteered them. Truth be told, it was the farthest thing from his mind. All he could focus on was Kaylee.

He was alone with her now, in the infirmary. He had dimmed the lights for nighttime; their bluish tint always gave the room a cold air. And Kaylee didn’t belong somewhere cold. She belonged in warmth, bathed in sunshine and full of happiness. That was who Kaylee was. That was the woman Simon loved.

He had never told her that, of course. He could never bring himself to say the words. But he thought she knew anyway. She always seemed to know what he was thinking. Not in the eerily accurate way that his sister did, but in a deeper, more emotional place. It was a connection they seemed to share, the ability to listen to each other without saying a word.

And what frustrated Simon more than anything was that he couldn’t hear her now. Whatever had Kaylee under refused to give her up. He had continued to alternate stimulants and doses hoping that he might perchance stumble on the correct combination. But there was nothing – no sign that any thing he did made a world of difference. And they were running out of options. As much as Simon hated to admit it, there was nothing he could do for her anymore. Maybe if he had more equipment, better instruments … maybe if he was just a better doctor he could find some answers, but he was out of ideas.

Reaching for her hand, Simon took it in his gently and held it firm. “Kaylee, come back to m

Comments
Monday, 13 February 2006 00:23
Ooo interesting developments! More soon would be great! :D
Monday, 13 February 2006 00:32
This is great!! I hope Inara's Doctor friend can help out poor Kaylee. Can't wait for the reunion between Mal and Inara too. Let the fireworks begin!
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 13 February 2006 00:33
Awesome story! Poor Kaylee, and poor Simon, blaming himself for not being able to figure it out!

I can't wit to read more!
Monday, 13 February 2006 00:46
Simon, Simon, yes I know you are in a panic over Kaylee but would have have killed you to speak to the Captain first? Sigh. Just hope all this isn't going to blow up in their faces before they can get Kaylee the help she needs. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 13 February 2006 13:09
Oh...oh.

This could get messy very quickly!
TAMFAN
Monday, 13 February 2006 20:20
Keep 'em coming.
Thursday, 16 February 2006 17:05
still intrigued. moving on to the next chapter. i'm really liking this =).
Saturday, 25 February 2006 16:18
i don't like marcus...he's mean...but yay! they're getting help for kaylee!!!

b
Wednesday, 07 June 2006 12:54
Yay for River and her psychic examination of Kaylee, plus the somewhat cryptic warnings.

*Of all the inside out pigs in the universe, I’ve got to be stuck with this one*

I love this phrase, and I want to figure it out in mandarin because I think it would be great to work into a story. (suo hou li mian zhong xiang wai zai yu zhou de zhu, wo bi xu bao chi yu bei de lian xi zhe ge, which is a mouthfull)

I like the fact that the current job was on Hera, and that it was flourishing with plant life so soon (relatively) after the Battle of Serenity.

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