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Revenant

Friday, February 10, 2006

The crew of Serenity help a parted couple reunite under trying circumstances. Oneshot, post-BDM but no spoilers for it.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3130    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Author’s Note: Welcome to what happens when I mix up a cocktail of writer’s block, Firefly and a spare afternoon off work with a cold. It struck me on my nth rerun of Trash that though Haymer’s garden had the odd Japanesque touch, the main word to describe it was “English”, and that a couple of people in that episode’s tangle deserved closure. Somehow that turned into a little story that wouldn’t clear out of my head to make way for my original fic till I wrote it down and got rid of it.

This is nowhere near my first fanfic but it’s my first foray into Firefly. Hence, I’m probably doing all sorts of things wrong, most crucially Mal’s idiolect, but as my editor’s too unimpressed to give me improvement tips, I thought I’d try you guys instead. Sorry.

Rating: PG for a couple of Chinese cusses.

Pairing: not for me to mention here, but inconsequential Mal/Inara implied.

Spoilers: major for Trash and Our Mrs Reynolds. None for the BDM, though this is set a month or so after it... well, there’s half a sentence that is kind of one, but it wouldn’t make sense or even shout “Hey! Spoiler!” if you hadn’t seen the BDM already, so I think that means it’s not really a spoiler. Is it?

Disclaimer: the characters are Joss Whedon’s and the copyright belongs to Fox, Mutant Enemy and many other people who aren’t me. This is a non-profit fanfic.

Archive: Want, Ask, Take, Have.

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Revenant

The sky over the ten-thousand-mile sea was dull and streaked with near-navy clouds. Salty drizzle carelessly spattered over the floating estates’ lush gardens. Left to this, leaves would wither and flowers would fade before they could be pollinated. So gardeners would trudge out after the storm had passed and repair the damage with desalinated sprinklers and careful tending. It was what was required.

Everywhere but on one estate, perhaps.

The sculpted paradises were all different, each tailored to its owner’s personality while remaining as beautiful as bef

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 10 February 2006 00:57
Interesting. I like the Japanese end.
I hope that I get this next part right...
<I>totemo yoi desu</I>
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 10 February 2006 01:03
wow, really nice. i do think its possible to redeem our favorite psycho bride ;)

~kaynara
Friday, 10 February 2006 01:24
I thought this was a very fine and nicely handled. Sad to see Neela in that condition but as much as it may be a gift for Haymer it is also as much of one for the formerly scheming little witch addicted to marrying folk in order to cheat them. A new start for them both and with the coin he tossed the Captain, a new lick of paint for the best lady in the 'verse - Serenity! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 10 February 2006 04:55
I thought it was really beautiful. Your imagry is fantastic, especially when you describe Inara. At the end when Mal gave is wrong and wronger speech... it was so Mal. Really, good fic. I hope to see more work from you soon.
Friday, 10 February 2006 10:13
WOW this was beautiful and damn it Arcadia said it all, great discription of inara and well every thing and mals wrong and wronger bit was very fitting. all in all it was just so damn pretty. Also i like the way you wrote Durran, it sounds like it would be him. you know kinda romantic, pessamistic, and a bit insane. he would have to be to love saffron, even through all her poison, and cazzyness.
Friday, 10 February 2006 11:54
Ilike this idea. Bringing Saffron back to Durran is so Mal.

Love the depictions of the characters.
Saturday, 11 February 2006 13:47
Thanks, guys! The Japanese sign-off is a relic of too much Weiss and Final Fantasy fic, I think... Arcadia, I'm working on an unconnected Firefly oneshot that I hope to have up here soon, so there is more from me in the 'verse to come. FYI, I also write original SF at http://forums.ffonline.com/showthread.php?t=42174.
Sunday, 12 February 2006 13:12
Ah, one of those stories you've been waiting for without knowing it!

Wonderful outside POV. You made Haymer come alive in a way that makes me wish we could have seen more of him. Saffron (to keep it short)... amazing idea, amazing treatment. Compassion but no more than she deserves. Such a fine line.

And then the very subtle, very elegant look at Mal and Inara.


What a lovely, quiet, powerful story.
Monday, 20 February 2006 18:05
i never thought i'd be able to say this at a fic involving durran and saffron, but here goes:
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwhttp://www...i love it!!!

b
Wednesday, 31 May 2006 18:45
And another jewel I missed when it first posted! So beautifully set, with all the gardens, and you create your own mood.

And I love seeing Mal and Inara in 3rd person. A minimal glimpse of the crew and ship, but with so much behind it.

You write super good! ;)

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