Author’s Note: Welcome to what happens when I mix up a cocktail of writer’s block, Firefly and a spare afternoon off work with a cold. It struck me on my nth rerun of Trash that though Haymer’s garden had the odd Japanesque touch, the main word to describe it was “English”, and that a couple of people in that episode’s tangle deserved closure. Somehow that turned into a little story that wouldn’t clear out of my head to make way for my original fic till I wrote it down and got rid of it.
This is nowhere near my first fanfic but it’s my first foray into Firefly. Hence, I’m probably doing all sorts of things wrong, most crucially Mal’s idiolect, but as my editor’s too unimpressed to give me improvement tips, I thought I’d try you guys instead. Sorry.
Rating: PG for a couple of Chinese cusses.
Pairing: not for me to mention here, but inconsequential Mal/Inara implied.
Spoilers: major for Trash and Our Mrs Reynolds. None for the BDM, though this is set a month or so after it... well, there’s half a sentence that is kind of one, but it wouldn’t make sense or even shout “Hey! Spoiler!” if you hadn’t seen the BDM already, so I think that means it’s not really a spoiler. Is it?
Disclaimer: the characters are Joss Whedon’s and the copyright belongs to Fox, Mutant Enemy and many other people who aren’t me. This is a non-profit fanfic.
Archive: Want, Ask, Take, Have.
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Revenant
The sky over the ten-thousand-mile sea was dull and streaked with near-navy clouds. Salty drizzle carelessly spattered over the floating estates’ lush gardens. Left to this, leaves would wither and flowers would fade before they could be pollinated. So gardeners would trudge out after the storm had passed and repair the damage with desalinated sprinklers and careful tending. It was what was required.
Everywhere but on one estate, perhaps.
The sculpted paradises were all different, each tailored to its owner’s personality while remaining as beautiful as bef
I hope that I get this next part right...
<I>totemo yoi desu</I>
~kaynara
You can't take the sky from me
Love the depictions of the characters.
Wonderful outside POV. You made Haymer come alive in a way that makes me wish we could have seen more of him. Saffron (to keep it short)... amazing idea, amazing treatment. Compassion but no more than she deserves. Such a fine line.
And then the very subtle, very elegant look at Mal and Inara.
What a lovely, quiet, powerful story.
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwhttp://www...i love it!!!
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And I love seeing Mal and Inara in 3rd person. A minimal glimpse of the crew and ship, but with so much behind it.
You write super good! ;)
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