Title: Not Always What They Seem
Rating: PG – NC17
Synopsis: Simon is kidnapped by the Feds and when Mal and Co. get him back, he’s not quite the same. And the doctor brought aboard to ‘fix’ him causes quite a stir.
Timeframe: Takes place a few months after the movie, Serenity.
Notes: The medical terms used in later chapters are hopefully correct. I looked up as much information as I could. If anyone notices a very glaring error, please let me know and I will correct it.
Disclaimer: This story is not meant to infringe on the copyright of any person or company related to the trademarked characters and situations depicted in the Serenity movie or Firefly series. I make no money from this. OnIy done for fun - and a desperate craving to have more stories told about this wonderful ‘verse Joss Whedon created.
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Prologue
“What was Simon thinking?” Mal swore as he paced the cargo hold. “I should have told him he couldn’t get off the gorram ship.”
“He’s been off the ship lotsa times since Miranda. No ones ever cared before,” Kaylee offered, twisting the end of her hair in an effort to channel her nervousness .
“Yeah, well someone does now.” Mal cocked his gun and turned toward Zoe and Jayne as they readied their own firearms. “We’re too close to a Core world for gorram’s sake! I should have insisted he stay put.”
“So much for that Operative tellin’ ya the truth.” Jayne said as he squinted down the barrel of one before holstering it with a snap and removing another.
“Maybe the Feds don’t have him,” Kaylee offered with a hopeful, shaky smile.
“Then who would?” Jayne asked with a dumfounded look.
“Another bounty hunter? Someone like Jubal Early?” Kaylee knew she was grasping at straws.
“Their names haven’t been removed from the wanted list. Though,” Zoe added, “I noticed there hasn’t been a recent warrant issued for their arrest.” She glanced up at Mal. “The Alliance has more concerns now than finding these two. Despite how they’ve tried to cover u
Awesome story, and I LOVE that there's potential for a sequel...*hint, hint*
You can't take the sky from me
I really liked this story, the whole "What did they do to Simon?" and "How will it affect him?" plot was a real page-turner, so to speak. I really hope you do a sequel, because, truth to tell, the ending feels like a cliff-hanger!
"I love my captain."
It was purposly left as a cliffhanger . . . :)
-goblueguy
Peace
Please give us the sequel. We can nag, too, you know!
*prod prod*
*rolls eyes*
*prod prod prod prod prod prod prod prod prod prod prod prod prod prod*
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I love this Mandarin, have used it myself a time or two.
*Jayne puffed out his chest proudly. “Yup. We did that.”*
Not to mention, I tried to sell
'em to the Feds.
I really like the linkage between Simon and River, good work.
*Jayne laughed at the silence that followed, adding, “Eh, I’m sure they take turns.”*
Classic, crude Jayne.
*“Your - cheerfulness - disturbs me.” *
Liked this line very much.
Very good story, and if you write a prequel or a sequel I will read those too.
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