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Not Always What They Seem

Wednesday, February 8, 2006

Simon is kidnapped by the Feds and when Mal and Co. get him back, he’s not <i>quite </i>the same. And the doctor brought aboard to ‘fix’ him causes quite a stir. Simon/Kaylee . NC-17 in Chapter 8. Don't read if such content offends.

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Title: Not Always What They Seem

Rating: PG – NC17

Synopsis: Simon is kidnapped by the Feds and when Mal and Co. get him back, he’s not quite the same. And the doctor brought aboard to ‘fix’ him causes quite a stir.

Timeframe: Takes place a few months after the movie, Serenity.

Notes: The medical terms used in later chapters are hopefully correct. I looked up as much information as I could. If anyone notices a very glaring error, please let me know and I will correct it.

Disclaimer: This story is not meant to infringe on the copyright of any person or company related to the trademarked characters and situations depicted in the Serenity movie or Firefly series. I make no money from this. OnIy done for fun - and a desperate craving to have more stories told about this wonderful ‘verse Joss Whedon created.

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Prologue

“What was Simon thinking?” Mal swore as he paced the cargo hold. “I should have told him he couldn’t get off the gorram ship.”

“He’s been off the ship lotsa times since Miranda. No ones ever cared before,” Kaylee offered, twisting the end of her hair in an effort to channel her nervousness .

“Yeah, well someone does now.” Mal cocked his gun and turned toward Zoe and Jayne as they readied their own firearms. “We’re too close to a Core world for gorram’s sake! I should have insisted he stay put.”

“So much for that Operative tellin’ ya the truth.” Jayne said as he squinted down the barrel of one before holstering it with a snap and removing another.

“Maybe the Feds don’t have him,” Kaylee offered with a hopeful, shaky smile.

“Then who would?” Jayne asked with a dumfounded look.

“Another bounty hunter? Someone like Jubal Early?” Kaylee knew she was grasping at straws.

“Their names haven’t been removed from the wanted list. Though,” Zoe added, “I noticed there hasn’t been a recent warrant issued for their arrest.” She glanced up at Mal. “The Alliance has more concerns now than finding these two. Despite how they’ve tried to cover u

Comments
Wednesday, 08 February 2006 16:45
Dang girl...suspense, action, drama...and some hot sex, too!

Awesome story, and I LOVE that there's potential for a sequel...*hint, hint*
Wednesday, 08 February 2006 18:02
Ooo great story! Fantastic job! A sequel would be good!!
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 08 February 2006 18:30
This was amazing! The story was captivating and well It definately need's a sequel or prequel... or both:)
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 08 February 2006 18:30
oops... that should read well writen
Wednesday, 08 February 2006 19:07
Consider this a prod. Excellent story.
Wednesday, 08 February 2006 19:10
Loved it! Can't wait to read your next post!
Wednesday, 08 February 2006 19:28
Very good and great to be able to read the whole gorram story in one sitting! I smiled at the ending, the way you have set it up for a sequel should you want to do one. Would be mighty fine to discover just why they want Simon to go to Earth-That-Was. I am suspicious that the images the old man projected with of the planet as it now is. Well done, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 08 February 2006 19:48
I've been following this at fanfiction.net. Am glad to see you post it here.

I really liked this story, the whole "What did they do to Simon?" and "How will it affect him?" plot was a real page-turner, so to speak. I really hope you do a sequel, because, truth to tell, the ending feels like a cliff-hanger!

"I love my captain."
Wednesday, 08 February 2006 19:56
I have a flair for the dramatic, what can I say? :)

It was purposly left as a cliffhanger . . . :)
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 08 February 2006 21:36
A truely awesome piece, I would be very interested in a sequel... no hinting here a plain out request. Keep up the great work, that was... see begining of this post (great, it was so shiny that you have me babbling :D )

-goblueguy
Wednesday, 08 February 2006 22:27
Loved every word of it. I should have done what you did here. I'm dealing with the same issues in my story, YOU CAN'T GO HOME AGAIN. Would like to get your perspective on it.

Peace
TAMFAN
Friday, 10 February 2006 16:33
Your Simon & Kaylee stuff is always good. Glad they got some closure with their mum.
Please give us the sequel. We can nag, too, you know!
Friday, 17 February 2006 17:18
*prod*

*prod prod*

*rolls eyes*

*prod prod prod prod prod prod prod prod prod prod prod prod prod prod*

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ANONYMOUS
Monday, 17 April 2006 20:32
It's been 2 months since anybody has prodded you for a sequel to this. More please.
Thursday, 25 May 2006 17:15
*juh jen sh guh kwai luh duh jean-jan*

I love this Mandarin, have used it myself a time or two.

*Jayne puffed out his chest proudly. “Yup. We did that.”*

Not to mention, I tried to sell
'em to the Feds.

I really like the linkage between Simon and River, good work.

*Jayne laughed at the silence that followed, adding, “Eh, I’m sure they take turns.”*

Classic, crude Jayne.

*“Your - cheerfulness - disturbs me.” *

Liked this line very much.

Very good story, and if you write a prequel or a sequel I will read those too.

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