Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Unspoken Shadows::5 -The Man They Call.........Jayne..-

Tuesday, February 7, 2006

Mal, Zoe, and Simon are in holding cell and are captives of the Blue Gloved agents and their Dog's. The other's are about to be sent out to the same facility; that is, until River shows up. Will she be enough to help her friends? And how will a Broken Jayne be of any use? Let's find out. Enjoy. :)

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2168    RATING: 7.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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He was alone. His blue-gloved hands balling into fists as he calmly walked down the corridor leading to the engine room. His patience had been tested to the fullest, and his temper was beginning to slowly burst out from his normally calm and cool exterior. His black polished dress shoes echoed slightly as he continued to walk down the corridor; his stone cold eyes piercing through every knook and kranny of the surrounding area.

"Enough. This is all so very pointless. You know you cannot win, and yet you persist to play this game of hide and seek. Heh. Irony I guess. You play while your friends are tortured. The large dumb one is on deaths' door right now."

The man stopped. He slowly turned around, only to see the petite figure of River Tam standing five-yards behind him.

"I know...." She said with a deep concentrated look on her face. "I know he's hurt. I can feel his pain. But he will not die. The heroine of the story is always victorious and fruitful. The hero dies sometimes. He usually sacrafices himself in a selfless act. But not the heroince. She's too good."

She smiled quantly as she stared upward at the tall man approaching her. River kept her hands behind her back. She had nothing in them. No weapon, no tricks. She had been hiding all this time because she knew that eventually one of the agents would go looking for her, and she felt it was time to end this; and if she was to pull it off, she would need to be rid of the main obstacle.

"Well miss Tam." The agent lifted his right hand up to straighten his glove. "You think you can honestly beat me." He reached into his left pocket and pulled out a small tub-like device.

River quickly reached in and locked her right thumb inbetween the index and middle finger of the agent and grasped his hand with hers.

" *Quan jou ji yu-in* The heroine never thinks, she always knows." River pressed her thumb down inbetween the middle and index knuckles and lifted the rest of his hand with hers, pai

Comments
Tuesday, 07 February 2006 07:26
River was brilliant, the blue hand guys creepy and evil but Mal's dialogue didn't sound quite right. I am really worried though that they are going to start cutting on Zoe. Cue a big damn rescue - please! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 07 February 2006 09:30
A good beginning but the spelling is atrocious and really annoying to read get a spell check.
Tuesday, 07 February 2006 11:51
Need a rescue for Mal & Zoe now. Maybe River can do an encore?

ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 07 February 2006 13:35
this is great!, Poor Jayne, Post more soon....
Sunday, 12 February 2006 20:09
Agree about the spelling but your plot's not bad.

Pet-peeve of mine... There isn't a 'British accent'. If you're referring to the accent of Badger then the correct term is 'cockney'.
Tuesday, 11 July 2006 17:53
Took me a couple of hours to find this fic again. Been wanting to see if there was any updates, but alas no. I don't know if you are still in the fandom or even check this site out, but I am here to beg you to write more of this fic. I want to find out what happens to Jayne! Please write more.

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