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Finding Solace

Saturday, February 4, 2006

More than just a little powerplay between Mal and Simon. This story is a stand-alone sequel to The Innocents(http://fireflyfans.net/sunroomitem.asp?i=6234). NC-17, adult language, situations and sexual content including explicit BDSM, very explicit male slash; M/s, and very light m/f; K/S

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 9983    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer: This story was written just for fun and is not an attempt to make money or infringe on any copyrights or trademarks belonging to Joss Whedon, Mutant Enemy, Fox or Universal. No disrespect is intended; imitation is the truest form of flattery. For any BDHs that might stumble across this, please know that this is a foray into fantasy with the characters we love without ever truly wanting to alter our beloved ‘verse. Anyone who might read this and consider associating the actual actors who play these characters on the screen with any of the events following should seriously consider therapy. Special thanks to Keltiknot for inspiration.

This story is a stand-alone sequel to The Innocents(http://fireflyfans.net/sunroomitem.asp?i=6234) It is a work of erotica fanfiction (NC-17, adult language, situations and sexual content including explicit BDSM, very explicit male slash; M/s, and very light m/f; K/S). You have been warned, so please read no further if you will be offended or are under the age of consent. For the rest of you, read on...

** Feedback is encouraged ** (January 2006)

Finding Solace

By Kessa (YoSaffBrig)

It seemed like everyone needed the infirmary for something that day. River woke up extremely fidgety and on edge. She had been rambling constantly all morning and Simon had been afraid to let her out of his sight for even a moment. Jayne had nearly ripped a tendon in his leg lifting something earlier in the cargo bay and had been laid up in the infirmary whining about it since the incident. Zoe was tending to Wash who was lying down uncomfortably on the side bunk sick with some 24-hour stomach virus. Kaylee had cut her arm on a piece of Serenity’s inner workings in the engine room and the doctor was in the middle of stitching her up when Mal strode in bellowing loudly.

“Where the chiang-Bao Hoe-tze duh guay is my crew?”

Ever since Simon, Kaylee, Mal and Inara had returned from Sundale Estates having rescued the 150 men an

Comments
Saturday, 04 February 2006 22:54
I am so glad you wrote this! I always felt that Simon & Mal's part in "The Innocents" needed completion. This was a powerful, moving look into Simon's mind after the events in the original story, and you told it very well. I especially like how he was able to get some of his own back on the man from Sundale Estates; and thereby get back control of his pscyhe. Great job!

"I love my captain."
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 05 February 2006 03:58
Yea, porn! It's been so PG in here lately.
Sunday, 05 February 2006 19:52
*blinks* *fans self* whoa!

Also? "Nice belt" ... funny!
Monday, 06 February 2006 03:56
Ooh!
I had missed the first story and had to go back and read it first. Phew. Very very lovely.
I almost would have been more amused though if the "representatives" would have actually been looking for Kaylee and Inara to come put on another show.
As it is, I liked that it was the catalyst for Simon to recover his self power. I could see him slipping into a violent lifestyle play that would destroy him...not with Mal, necessarily, but overall.

My favorite part though, I think, was the conversation with Book. His voice is hard to capture well so it's good to see it done right. Thank you!
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 06 February 2006 06:24
Oh my...that was so gorram good. You really have their voices...the language was spot on. Loved the whole scene with Mal and Simon...hell no...I adored it.

You write very well...very erotic and hypnotic. Loved every second.

Addie
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 06 February 2006 10:58
First of all, I have to say I admire your writing....it is very intense and moving...your erotic writing actually IS erotic, unlike most that try. As far as the writing, storytelling, etc. this is awesome.

The one problem is it's not too credible in my eyes. I could stretch my imagination enough to see the story of The Innocents happening, which made it all the more affecting. With this one, the little nagging in the back of my head kept saying "this just wouldn't happen."

I hope you keep writing more of these stories; I look forward to reading them.
Monday, 06 February 2006 22:40
yeah so that was like the yummiest thing I've ever read

*loves you*
Wednesday, 08 February 2006 14:45
Thank You all for your words of kindness and for any and all constructive criticism.

I have enjoyed writing this set of stories. I am very much into ending stories back into canon no matter how far they may stray. If you have any coupling ideas for me that you could see coming back round to canon, please feel free to let me know.

Until next time,

Aim to Misbehave!

~Kessa (YoSaffBrig)
Monday, 13 February 2006 17:07
"...I will beat you, Simon Tam.”
“I’m sure you will.”
my god, that sure is a boatload full o' kinkies...brilliant!!!

b
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 03 March 2006 16:34
Wow YoSaffBrig ... Learn something new about ourselves every day. I loved this, and loved the Mal/Simon stuff. Never been a big fan of f/f but appreciated your take on how Inara helped Kaylee through the punishment in "The Innocents". If was so in character, you knew that Inara knew what she was doing. With all your warnings at the beginning no one has a right to complain about what they found and frankly it was your warnings that made me open the story. Thanks again for a very unusual take on these relationships. Patti

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