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BOOK OF DAYS SERIES: #1. "And So It Begins"

Friday, January 20, 2006

Just filling in some scenes missing from the film, Serenity. Simon/Kaylee. First part in a multi-part series.

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Title: And So it Begins

Rating: PG-13

Synopsis: Just filling in some scenes missing from the film, Serenity.

Notes: First part of my Book of Days series

Author’s Note: I refuse to think that Simon’s wound at the end of Serenity (the movie, not the episode of the same name) was anything less than incredibly serious. I also believe that the medical technology available on the Alliance ships were able to heal him quite rapidly (I assume it took only a few weeks) – thus allowing for the lovely, shirtless scene at the very end of the film.

Disclaimer: This story is not meant to infringe on the copyright of any person or company related to the trademarked characters and situations depicted in the Serenity movie or Firefly series. I make no money from this. OnIy done for fun – and a desperate craving to have more stories told about this wonderful ‘verse Joss Whedon created.

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“Stand down. It’s Finished. We’re finished.”

Heavy metal weapons fell from slack fingers as River Tam bounded through the open blast doors. The strong, stoic face of the government-made assassin instantly turned into that of a frightened young girl – frightened that she had not kept her promise; frightened that she had not saved him.

Alliance troops lowered their weapons and made no move to stop the blood-covered girl. Instead, they turned to gape at the bodies that littered the floor at her feet.

River’s eyes fell on her brother, lying motionless on the floor, Inara’s hand resting on his shoulder. Her legs couldn’t carry her to his side fast enough and when she fell to her knees beside him, the tears were already slipping down her cheeks.

The Captain stood behind her as Kaylee’s arm reached toward her brother. Inara sat back as she covered Simon’s bloodstained hand with her own. She pressed them against his side, and shuddered when he groaned from the pain.

“River?” Simon’s voice held a wondrous surprise and a grateful relief. His sister was alive.

“It’s ok

Comments
Friday, 20 January 2006 04:38
Entirely adorable and awww and great. You've totally got a fan in me now.

ONE of my fav lines "They didn’t kiss, but Simon brushed his cheek against hers and their air sizzled around them when their eyes met."

I'm totally hooked on your style, your voice, your pacing, everything. Good on ya!
Friday, 20 January 2006 05:14
I wasn't going to read this, preferring to keep the missing scenes in my imagination. But after writing "When River Cries" I figured I needed cheering up.
You're imagination is a HELLA lot better than mine!

I cried through the first half and laughed through the second half. Very very well done! And I like how you gave every character their moment.
Jaynes "sycho-what?" just made me crack up.
Friday, 20 January 2006 10:23
I read this at ffnet last night, but couldn't help rereading it today, I think that speaks for itself in what I think of it ;)
Friday, 20 January 2006 10:26
Superbly written Kaylee and Simon though it did feel miraculous to me how only Simon was badly injured, everyone else going on much as they had before as if all they needed were band aids. When I watched the movie there was a point when I had the horrible gut wrenching notion that Joss was going to kill *all* our Big Damn Heroes. Just couldn't stop the tears running down my face, so happy that didn't happen but still feel the tragic loss of Book and Wash. This piece was so lovingly good at showcasing how Kaylee and Simon feel about each other and bringing that relationship into clear focus. Heartwarming! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 20 January 2006 21:31
Keep going. I'm liking these stories. We do need some more Silee writers out there. Great story!
Wednesday, 25 January 2006 19:38
awwwwwwwhttp://www...*dies a little* that was just so sweet and...and...awwwwwwwwwwwhttp://www...
and the comic relief of river fitted in perfectly:
“Interlocking parts can be done when you’ve healed, Simon.”

b
Friday, 05 May 2006 03:41
Aww! It was sweet! Simon almost dies...I would've died. But YAYZ! He lives!
Friday, 19 May 2006 19:48
Very well written, you have the character's voices down pat (but I am sure you already knew that).

You used the word supernova, one of my favorite words. You rock face.
Sunday, 21 May 2006 04:18
This is really great. The characterisations are dead on accurate. Very important especially since this a follow on to the movie. I love your River especially. What I did like most was the way you extended Simon and Kaylee's feelings and explored it in a way that fit. Justlike an episode.

Great stuff!

Luc.

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