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Wednesday, January 11, 2006

It's my first fan fic! Please be nice, I'm sure I'll pick up style as I go along! - Something changes dramatically aboard Serenity (post OIS)

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2601    RATING: 8.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Silence fell throughout Serenity, the ship seemingly sleeping along with its inhabitants. In the engine room Kaylee gently rocked from side to side, her hand hanging outside of her hammock, gently grazing the wall as she swung. Her breathing fell into rhythm with that of Serenity’s engine; the soft pulse of the ship’s heart the only reason why Kaylee would ever stray from her bunk and sleep elsewhere, its gentle beat more powerful than any soother Simon could prescribe.

Beyond the engine room nothing else stirred, the pilot’s seat sat empty as Wash slumbered peacefully next to his wife, whilst Jayne stretched comfortably across his bunk with Vera wrapped lovingly in his arms. Mal sat asleep with his head in his hand, the dim light of his lamp providing a gentle warm which had sent him off to sleep not but a few minutes ago. Papers lay strewn across bunk; he’d spent the better part of his evening not engaging in the usual friendly banter in the living area but attempting to rustle up a job from the scraps that were available. Badger had tried to railroad him into accepting another shipment of plastic novelties but a man’s pride could only take so much, he had gotten enough stick from Inara after the last time. There was an offer of transporting some stolen settler supplies to some of the border planets but Reaver activity had Mal worried, he wasn’t ashamed to admit it. He had fallen asleep contemplating whether he ought to tell the crew he’d considered selling his left kidney on the black market in an attempt to raise enough funds to keep Serenity flying.

He hadn’t told anyone else of his concerns, although Inara had made a couple of inquiries as to which planet they’d be passing next and his excuses had begun to wear thin. She’d seemed less insistent in recent days however, as if she had sensed the change in his disposition and had not want to antagonise him further. She too was sleeping soundly aboard her shuttle, her client screen still activated with hopeful faces of men frozen on it. Over

Comments
Wednesday, 11 January 2006 23:19
Hmmm very interesting. You have a very beautiful way with words. I would suggest breaking up the long chunks of narrative so it's easier on the eyes. I'm interested to know who darcie is and what you're going to do with this....waiting for your next post.
Thursday, 12 January 2006 00:45
Okay, who is Darcie and how come Kaylee knew her and went back to sleep once she saw who it was? Also, would appreciate the text being broken into paragraphs. Can't wait to see where you intend to take this. Ali D :~)
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Thursday, 12 January 2006 01:06
Sorry about that! Got so excited about posting that I forgot about the need for breakage! :D
Tuesday, 14 February 2006 22:19
Oooh intrieging start!

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