Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

The Chosen

Monday, January 9, 2006

Another very odd pairing from me. Inara/Jayne. Serenity stops in at the Companion Training House, and Inara learns as much as she teaches.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4743    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Inara entered the classroom, donning a deep purple and gold brocade dressing gown, a jewel toned satin negligee visible through the sheer material. To call the elegantly decorated space a classroom was almost an insult to her mind. A large bed sat prominently in the center, lush earth toned pillows adorned with jewels and embroidery sat ready and waiting for a patron. A small amphitheater looked down on the bed, plush cushions and pillows spread out on each tier for the dozen or so novices to have a perfect view.

This lesson was one of the hardest for her to teach. Not least of all because it required the use of all her skills as a Companion, but because she simultaneously had to explain each of them as they were used. It often acted as a distraction to her model, which could ruin the lesson completely.

She moved to the bed, trailing her recently manicured nails along the rich silk, inhaling a deep breath to gather her thoughts, exceptionally scattered by the landing of Serenity just twenty-four hours ago.

No matter that she had ample warning that they were coming, seeing Mal again, after so long was a shock to her system. And as unwelcome as the distraction was, she could never quite bring herself to wish he hadn’t come. It was reassuring to see him alive and well, his eyes darker and deeper than she remembered, but the smile, the corner of his mouth quirking into that irresistible smirk, still made her heart tumble over in her chest.

It had been a blessing to see the others as well, never far from her thoughts. She hadn’t had to look hard to see the wear on each of their faces, known that things had gotten harder for them. The jobs had gotten further and farther in between, Kaylee had told her when they had a moment alone.

Mal had said they had a contact at the training house and Inara wasn’t surprised. She had a sinking suspicion that the Head Priestess had called upon Serenity for a job merely to meet the pirate captain who’d stolen her heart, or so said the persistent rumors. It was no ma

Comments
Monday, 09 January 2006 16:30
Woo-hoo.

Yes, yes and yes.

Thanks!



Vera
Monday, 09 January 2006 17:00
wayhey!!

love love loved that.

fabulous

want more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

kizzie
XxX
Monday, 09 January 2006 17:24
nice one :)
Monday, 09 January 2006 18:13
Ya know I almost didn't read this one because the pairing was just too strange, but knew I liked your other stuff so I gave it a shot. I find myself unexpectedly charmed. Which is a wierd reaction to an NC-17 Jayne/Inara fic, but there it is. Good job making a totally non-cannon type idea not only belivable, but enjoyable.
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 09 January 2006 19:01
That was awesome...I too almost didn't read because of unlikely pairing but so glad I did. writing was seamless. characters true and the descriptions excellent. you rocked this one. keep writing.
Monday, 09 January 2006 20:27
grrr...*wants*
that proves it. no matter what they say, NO woman can resist the hero of canton.

b
Monday, 09 January 2006 21:32
That was wonderful; you have the voices perfect!
Monday, 09 January 2006 23:29
Wonderful.
You don't come acorss a Jayne/Inara story very often. In fact, I've only ever found one other. It was quite good, but let me tell you, this one beats the pants off of it. (pardon the pun)
It was a beautiful piece of writing.

Tuesday, 10 January 2006 01:15
That was so incredible. I think it's interesting that everyone writes about Jayne's hands, but you're the only one who actually thought to use them.
It was so beautiful and you managed to not compromise Mal and Inara at the same time.
Tuesday, 10 January 2006 06:02
very interesting. both the voices were spot-on, and the language was beautiful.
great work!
Tuesday, 10 January 2006 11:46
Beautiful! Great interaction between Jayne and Inara. I loved that Inara finally realised that there was more to Jayne than she realised.

“Damn it, ‘Nara, I can perform stars into your eyes" Woo hoo!
Tuesday, 10 January 2006 14:57
When I first saw this, I immediately remembered an interview with Adam about the BDM where he said that he tried to play what drove his character sexually, and that Inara was the ideal woman for Jayne. "Jayne has a crush on Inara," he told Joss. Joss said, "No, you don't!" But he played it that way anyhow. He tried to convey an attraction there.
Whether this was your inspiration or not, you've convinced me that it could have worked on some level. Very nicely done.
MERCENARYSONG
Friday, 13 January 2006 04:03
exceptional. I've read this many times and keep finding new things. keep writing--you've captured Jayne/Inara beautifully.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 10 March 2006 23:11
One of my favorite stories. Very complete. Thank you for writing and sharing.

Thursday, 23 November 2006 04:56
Well written as always.

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