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Friday, January 6, 2006

A flashback of Jayne as a teenager, and why he left his home so long ago. A touch of Jaylee on the side.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3717    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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There ain’t ever been a lot of good in Jayne’s life. His days been mostly full of dirt and sweat and blood, a few moments of happy sprinkled about in between. When something good comes along, he doesn’t waste time questioning it like some fool Captain he knows, he grabs on and holds tight for as long as he can.

And he got a hold of something real good, here on Serenity. Or rather, she’s got a hold of him.

Kaylee’s got herself curled up on his chest, ‘cause there just ain’t room for her on the mattress with his body takin’ up space, sighing all happy like and Jayne can’t help but smile. He should be tired after the workout lil’ Kaylee put him through, but he aint ready to drift off just yet, didn’t make sense to waste his time with her by sleepin’.

Girl seemed to have similar ideas, she squirmed around a little, wedging herself in under his arm, her nice, soft thigh hugging his hip. Now, things’d be perfect if she’d just keep--

“Jayne?”

He rolled his eyes at the ceiling. This *thing* between ‘em only just started, but he figured out right quick that Kaylee had a habit of talkin’ after sex. Talkin’ during sex too, for that matter, but that he didn’t mind so much. The talkin’ after was harder on a fella. Shoulda expected it though, girl couldn’t keep that pretty mouth of hers closed the rest of the time neither.

“Hmm?” He grunted, hopin’ for the best. He cared about the girl, probably more ‘n he should. Her fingers slid over his chest, threading through the curling hairs. Oh hell, definitely more ‘n he should. But that don’t mean he gotta talk back.

Her fingers are drifting lower, and he grins a little, maybe he aint so worn out as he thought. “I’ve been wonderin’…” her words are whisper soft and hesitant. And that aint normal.

Wo de ma, he hated talkin’. “Well, spit it out.”

He braced himself, expectin’ a whole mess ‘o talk about his intentions and feelin’s and their future. Her hand stopped on it’s quest down his body, the pad of her finger smoothing over the raised ridges of skin belo

Comments
Friday, 06 January 2006 06:29
I really liked this. It was so simple and sweet.
Friday, 06 January 2006 08:04
I can't believe how clearly I could picture this, how perfectly you captured both Jaynes (older and young) and Kaylee...not too fluffy, not too romantic to be believeable...
you are amazing:)
Thanks for sharing this with us!
Friday, 06 January 2006 08:05
damnit...
not to romantic to be 'UNbelieveable'...meaning that is has just the right amount of believeability...
(real word? I don't care!)
:)
oh well, since I can't spell at least I can rate it again!
Friday, 06 January 2006 11:16
I always like stories of the characters' early lives. This one was great. Love that Kaylee believes in him.
Friday, 06 January 2006 11:53
love.

more to say? i think not!
Friday, 06 January 2006 11:59
Love how certain Kaylee is of him. She knows -as we all do- that Jayne doesn't hurt innocents. He only harms those who are capable of fighting back and/or deserve some form of punishment.
Simple, and yet not.
Great writing.
Friday, 06 January 2006 12:11
This is beautiful. Nothing less than what I'd expect from you, of course, just...

Ya done good.
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 06 January 2006 12:34
Thank you, this made my morning (it's been a rough week).

Jaylee mixed with Jayne history - a girl can't ask for more!

Thanks again!
Friday, 06 January 2006 14:05
Wonderful!! Put a big smile on my face.

Jayne's past being exorcised by Kaylee's complete faith in him........

So sweet..... They're besotted with each other.

Lovely! Thanks!!!
Friday, 06 January 2006 16:56
This is Jaylee at it's best.

Love the flashback, very true to Jayne.

I love how Kaylee just knows, it's perfect.

:;sighs:: I needed this. Thanks.
Friday, 06 January 2006 22:58
poor jayne!!!! for some odd reason, i actually feel physically sick thinking about him being branded a rapist...

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ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 21 January 2006 08:03
poor jayne. kaylee will make it better
Tuesday, 11 July 2006 19:22
I've been making my way through your catalog this summer and have found piece after piece of wonderful stuff.

This really touched my core. Dear Jayne, who is so often dehumanized and written off as just a rude killer. Takes deep wounds, and not just those made by bullet or blade, to make a man the way he is.

And I,like CH and others before me, am profoundly moved by Kaylee's absolute sureness in the reality of the man she loves.

Tight, haunting, wonderful voicing and sweet. I agree with Jacqui, ya done good.
Saturday, 30 September 2006 23:36
This was frakking great! I feel so inspired now!
Sunday, 04 February 2007 10:41
So sad and sweet.

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