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Of Softness and Steel - Part 5: Frippery

Tuesday, January 3, 2006

Jaylee. A job goes sour. When don't they?

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3516    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Bermuda was one of them dark towns. Most of the bigger planets just outside of the Core had ‘em. Smaller cities tucked up outta sight of the bigger ones, located in the least desirable locations, too far north or south to get much sunlight. Usually around some mine shaft, or industrial work place. Dark and dirty. Home of the working class. Or slave class, dependin’ on the planet.

Mal liked ‘em cause Serenity didn’t stand out much. And the people there… they were always looking for something bright and new to light up their dreary lives. Give ‘em a bit of hope.

Jayne kinda figured Kaylee liked ‘em cause they liked her. People on Bermuda looked at Kaylee like she were somethin’ special. Now, maybe she noticed and maybe she didn’t. But Jayne liked to think she didn’t. Girl like Kaylee, she was like a mirror. A good mirror. The kind that only reflected back to the good things people wanted t’see ‘bout themselves. Or maybe they was like mirrors to her, the more smiley and happy she got at someone, the more she got sent back at ‘er. Maybe they was both mirrors and there weren‘t nothin‘ real ‘bout any of it. Just a buncha reflectin’.

Whole thing made him a bit dizzy, just thinkin’ about it.

Guess it didn’t matter much t’ him. Meetin’ new people made her happy, an’ he liked it when she was happy.

He watched her as they was walking through town, dusk just beginning to darken the sky. He and Kaylee and Mal and Zoe, marchin’ ahead straight for the rendezvous point, one of them watering holes just like you could find on any ol’ planet or moon. Cap’n wanted to leave her behind, but Kaylee flashed him her prettiest smile and some nonsense about needing a break from Simon, when everyone knew they only split up long enough to recuperate so they could go at it again. But Mal aint never learned how to say no to the girl, so now she was here and kept fallin’ behind, and Jayne slowed, exchanging a nod with Zoe, promising her with a look that he’d keep an eye on the mechanic.

Maybe both.

She was drawn magnetic

Comments
Tuesday, 03 January 2006 08:58
Awww.

This was sweet! Just sweet.

I mean, all the blood and our favourite people getting hurt wasn't, but all the rest was.

Jayne's just so gorram tasty. You write him well.
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 03 January 2006 10:16
If only I could be bothered to log in and comment. I love your work, you write all these characters so well :) Please tell me your gonna continue with this

Tuesday, 03 January 2006 10:30
I didn't think it was possible to love Jayne more, but there you go makin' it possible. ;P
I've been waiting for the next part to this series for a while now, but it was well worth it. You can take just as long with the next one if that's what it takes for such quality work.
Thanks for sharing.
Tuesday, 03 January 2006 11:12
Loved how you did this, you made the scenes between Jayne and Kaylee so believable and I loved it that Jayne took Kaylee back to Serenity where she would be safe before going back into the fray to get Mal and Zoe out. Simon may have all the fancy words but Jayne's the one with romance in his soul. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 03 January 2006 12:26
I'm loving this series, you write my favourites so well. This chapter is wonderful, I love the kiss, the comb...everything.
Tuesday, 03 January 2006 12:49
Aaaaaaawwwwwwww! Just lovely!

The shiniest, fluffiest Jaylee fluff!

I liked it so much, I went back & read the rest, and some of your other Jaylee fanfic.

It's excellent. Keep writing, RinnyPJ!
I'm loving your Jayne and Kaylee!!!
Tuesday, 03 January 2006 20:15
very very awesome! so good. especially the :just say thank you: bit.

i love stuff that works out well!
Thursday, 05 January 2006 05:44
So pretty! But I already told you that. :)
Friday, 06 January 2006 18:29
*sigh* jayne...

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ANONYMOUS
Monday, 09 January 2006 17:16
"Any reason? Hell, he could think of a few hundred if she gave him the time."
Please tell me you will take the time to tell us? Pretty please???
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 20 January 2006 03:13
you have to write more i need to know what happens
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 21 January 2006 09:44
I love your Jayne. Please continue.
Monday, 01 May 2006 03:34
Gotta *heart* the Jaylee. I love this story. Keep it coming!!! The whole comb thing, how she thought she'd lost it. I just...wow I love it.

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