Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

You Can't Go Home Again: Chapter 7

Monday, January 2, 2006

This is all Kaylee goodness in which she wanders the estate, looks through the past and does some figurative and literal repairs of her own while chatting with her mother-in-law.

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Here's the next chapter. Credit must be given to not only KaySky for her contributions to the Kaylee/Regan interaction, but also to ScrewTheAlliance, for his invaluable editiorial comments.

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Kaylee woke up late to an empty bed the next morning. Simon must have slipped out earlier in the morning, she decided, because she could not find him, River or Gabriel anywhere in the house. Her initial instinct was to find Mal and tell him that they’ve been snatched. But then she realized how silly that sounded now that they were no longer in danger. They just weren’t around.

After getting dressed, she decided to walk around the mansion, feeling a little silly about carrying her toolbox around for security.

She wanted to really see and explore where her husband and sister in law played and grew up. She found it intriguing to get a sense of how the estate had shaped their lives. Perhaps she could figure out how something that should have been so good ended up so bad.

She started off in the main hall of the mansion. She was amazed at just how big the whole place was. Her childhood home could’ve fit into this room itself, with half of the shed. The floor was a dark marble, everything else seemed to be made of oak, which had really detailed carvings all around it with a shiny look to it. There was an elegant, octagonal shaped skylight directly above her that brought a warm light into the house. But the weather was still overcast, so all that could be seen through it was grey.

She walked through the dining room (the plates from the night before were still there with flies beginning to hover around the food), and into the living room. She sat on the expansive sofa couch, and was surprised to discover that Shooter was right. This really was the most comfortable couch she had ever sat on.

She looked around and noticed that even though the room was smaller, it looked similar to all the other rooms she had seen. All oak and veneer. But the

Comments
Monday, 02 January 2006 03:13
“I was horny and he was cute.”

LMAO so very Kaylee! Great answer :P
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 02 January 2006 06:40
Great job. That is just how i pictured simons mom. The conversation between her and kaylee was great.
Monday, 02 January 2006 09:43
I couldn't quite see Kaylee and Regan buddying up like this. Makes me feel if she really was this loving as a mother she would have listened to Simon when he asked his parents for help to find River. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 03 January 2006 16:21
Love how you've given them all backgrounds, and especially the easy way you relate them. A long time coming, these last two chapters, but very fine. Thanks!
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 04 January 2006 12:38
More please... and soon

I like the way you found a way for Kaylee to show off her talents in a way that might garner a little respect from Simon's parents (father really, mother seems cool with her).
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 04 January 2006 12:39
sorry, didn't think to log in for the post above.
-goblueguy
Thursday, 05 January 2006 13:48
i could totally imagine the whole conversaion going like that. Regan never seemed that bad to me, and i really think that she would be able to relate to Kaylee like that.
Keep up the good work!!!
JESSCLIFTON
Wednesday, 15 February 2006 17:34
This is such a great story! Please update soon :)
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 27 March 2006 13:38
this sucked giant nuts i spent my time on the internet wasting time reading this story .... WTF!!!!!!! i want my 7 minutes of life back thank you you need some stuff that kids like this year and that is hot girls hot girls im out
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 27 March 2006 13:39
i agree ith him^^^ this sucks
Monday, 27 March 2006 17:27
Anon - how about you offer some constructive criticism rather than just say it 'sucked' so plainly. What did you not like about it?

I rather liked that Kaylee found something to do at the estate and her going through the childhood images of her husband and sister in law were well done. And her conversation with Regan was very sweet and seemingly in character.

Interesting that you've posted twice, you see the IP address is logged on Anon posters so we can all see that it is you both times pretending to be someone else.
Monday, 27 March 2006 17:34
Thank you, Leiasky for your comments.

And to the Anonymous asshole who posted that comment, if you're going to stab me in the back, then at least have the guts to do it to my face.

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