Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

You Can't Go Home Again Chapters 1-5

Wednesday, December 13, 2006

Set after THE SERENITY GIG, BLUE HAND BLUES and SHOTGUN TAM, this story takes place in an AU where the BDM never happened, although there will be refrences to it. With the social and economic breakdown of the Alliance, the Tam's are finally free. But a message from home forces them to deal with a larger issue at hand.

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Well, it's been nearly six months since I've posted a new chapter of my epic. But after working my ass off during the summer spiking railroads for 13 hours a day in 30 degree heat (that's in celcius), and then putting it back on during my fall semester, I'm finally getting back to work on the story and finishing it up. So I figured to remind longtime readers of the story, as well as to get newcomers interested, I've decided to re-post the first nine chapters in two collections. There'd be chapters 1-5 today (Wednesday), 6-9 tomorrow (Thursday) and then Chapter 10 on Friday with hopefully the next few chapters each day (I'm thinking 15 chapters).

It helps if you read my earlier stories in this order. THE SERENITY GIG, BLUE HAND BLUES and SHOTGUN TAM. The story is a culmination of those events.

Thanks to TamSibling, ScrewTheAlliance, the late KaySky, misskitten and anyone else who has helped me out with this story.

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As the shuttle engines faded away, three people picked up their belongings and began to walk towards the estate. One of them carried a medical bag, the brown leather faded like an old jacket with the stitching of the handle starting to come apart. Another one carried a square metal box. With every step the clink of metal could be heard coming from the box, which seemed to shine bright red despite the overcast weather. And a third one carried a battered guitar case. Stickers in English and Chinese covered the case as much to repair the rips and tears as for decoration.

Two of the carriers would be returning to a place they had not seen in years, while a third one, filled with joy and hope, would be visiting the place for the first time.

The estate was fairly large. The grounds around it gave it sense of isolation from the outside world, which was heightened by the old force field posts surrounding the area and the big iron gates with the hand scan pad and video screen to the side. But despite its stately surroundin

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Wednesday, 13 December 2006 06:32
still as good as i remember it. i'm glad you'rereposting this for those who didn't et the chance to read this wonderful story the first time round.
i'll be gladto read the next installment again.
-Fred
Wednesday, 13 December 2006 14:46
I am ecstatic that you are writing again, so many thanks for coming back with news that there is more to follow. Really appreciate the chance to refresh my memory as well. This is simply superb! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 14 December 2006 00:46
Glad to hear you're back, this story was just as good this time as it was was originally. Can't wait for more.
-goblueguy
Friday, 15 December 2006 18:53
I really do like how you're building the 'verse post-Miranda, this is an interesting timeframe and I think it deserves some introspection. And I like how you're writing Kaylee and Kaylee with Simon. It's good to see her sticking up for herself and trying to do what's best for Simon even if he can't see it.

River as a singer, I'm not so sure about. It's not so much the singing as the types of songs - something tells me that 500 years from now we won't be remembering Green Day - it's not quite Mozart, even though it is really good. I think it's the juxtaposition of our 'verse with the modern music that throws me.

But the story is great!
MSB
Tuesday, 26 February 2008 15:43
Wow really good:) I especially like your story line

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