AN: After finishing up my series "Pretty ... pretty", I asked what people wanted next, standalones within the same 'verse or new stuff. And Serenyty asked for a Silee series without kids. This "series" is slightly inspired by ManicGiraffe's "Payin' up", in the sence that it's Simon/Kaylee, it involves games and co-plotting between River and Kaylee, and most importantly its objective is getting our two favourite people together :P
AN2: I was pondering on making it post Serenity, but that would have made my main objective pretty pointless, so instead it's AU post "Objects in space". To avoid the moral speech on booze and inappropriate behaviour, lets say Book left for Haven, shall we? (I like the guy, but I don't see him joining in on this scenary). Inara's still there though, but barely... lol
AN3: Inge, you're officially my dirty little muse! Thanks for the great suggestions :P Also thanks to EA, River, Gypsylife and Washie for some of the suggestions as well :)
AN4: I know I've read lambytoes being used somewhere else, I just can't remember where. But you all know now, that it's not mine.
- This is too juvenile, he commented. - And I'm not letting River drink.
Kaylee and River exchanged significant glances at each other. The two of them shared a common problem. A doctor that answered to Simon Tam. The guy that never seemed to be able to get his foot out of his mouth long enough to let the mechanic know how he felt about her and who still viewed his little sister as the fourteen year old girl she had been when she had been sent to the Academy.
- Adult next week, River reminded him. - No power in the 'verse can stop me then.
Simon groaned and rubbed his temple, did she have to remind him?
- You might as well just let her drink tonight, since she's gonna start then anyway, Kaylee pointed out. - 'Sides, I was fifteen when I started drinkin', jus' be glad she didn' start sooner.
- She's not drinking tonight, and that's f
I think several of us have used "lambey-toes" before, but it actually comes from "War Stories". Wash calls Zoe "lambey-toes" when they're arguing in the cockpit.
And the "I wuv you" was priceless. So very Wash.
I can so see that happening!
I laughed so hard in this chapter from the stuff you added.. I was blank, but Gypsy and Ea sure werent!! :P
I also like when Mal's like "Druth or Tare?" That was good. And Simon;s boner... Hehe! And the deepest shade of red her turned.. almost crimson!
I laughed the hardest (which was bad being this late.. :P) When all out of the blue Mal and Jayne passed out right after each other. Like clockwork!
And one of the best endings ever! Jayne's gonna get stripped!! Is this a stand-alone? Cause this needs a sequel!
10!10!10!
*Giggles*
Although, I would have made Jayne reveal something intensely personal (but maybe that's just because I am totally in love with him!)
Det er virkelige godt og meget sjov, synes jeg.
hvordan har du fundet på dette her for den nyt historie.
Also the series title is "fun and games" ergo if you want continuing parts, plotbunnies on what games you want me featuring at the core, as well as other suggestions are very much welcome.
So I hope you will get over whatever grudge you have against this style of dialogue and enjoy the story.
Just one thing: It almost forayed into a high rating. I'm begging you: please don't do that! I didn't mind what was in this fic, but still. I'm a teenager, and I wouldn't be able to read it if it had a higher rating.
That being said, this was great! With Pretty... pretty, I've gotten used to your writing style.
I could so see this happen with the Serenity crew. More please!
So, I'm still the little dirty muse huh? :p
Loved the story, hope you'll write another installment soon :)
*giggles at the thought of Mal in one of Inara's dresses :)*
I loved the whole stroyline of it. "First one to pass out..." Love it.
Can't wait for your next one!
Keep up the good work!1
-kaynara
it is absolutely perfect and very funny.
made me lol real good :)
also mad my boss rather pissed do what can i say cant have evrything :)
b
p.s. i loved aiden and leilah!!! you gonna write anything else with them in the future?
There are some great visuals when reading and some read laugh out loud/spurt juice from nose, moments.
Excellent!
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