Pretty Fits: Part 5
Sunday, December 25, 2005
a)What happens when they bring Kaylee back aboard? b)is she gonna make it? And c)what is Shepherd Book up to?
CATEGORY: FICTION TIMES READ: 3137 RATING: 9.0 (PG13) SERIES: FIREFLY
A/N: This is me disclaiming and saying that all these characters and the ship and the 'verse belong to Joss the Boss. Not mine.
A/N: Length isn't everything...but I hope to post a pretty decent one in a few days.
Also I can kill you with my brain if you read this and don't comment.
Chapter 5
As the entourage rushed back up the ramp wheels were set into motion. Simon instantly morphed into doctor mode assessing Kaylee’s condition. Mal hovered in the infirmary, while Zoe stood completely still gripping Wash’s hand which rested on her shoulder just outside. River sat curled up on the stairs beside Jayne who stood leaning against the railings. Inara stayed as close to Kaylee as she could without getting in the doctor’s way.
“She gonna be alright?” The amount of emotion in Jayne’s voice as he appeared in the doorway caused Mal to do a double take.
“I’m not certain. The trauma to her head and the blood loss alone are severe.” Simon opened his mouth to say something else, but then seemed to think better of it. He bent over her and tried to focus on each task at hand.
“Jayne.” Mal called to him and Jayne walked over to him, leaning close. “Go fetch the shepherd. And be quick about it. I want off this rock.”
Jayne nodded and moved from the doorway. One single tear rolled down Inara‘s face and Mal moved slightly behind and beside her, placing his hand on the small of her back. Simon continued to work unaware of anything except his patient and his hands.
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Jayne entered the tiny musky back room of the bar and quickly took in his surroundings. Shepherd Book knelt leaning closely over Thayer whose body was now prostrate on the ground. He made a face, both confounded and questioning at the same time.
“Well now preacher, I always figured you for women folk.”
After one of those ’feel the other person out’ kind of silences, Book stood and went to where Jayne was standing.
“Kaylee?” Book possessed a way of just calming you with his voice, but right now Jayne wasn’t too taken
After one of those ’feel the other person out’ kind of silences, Book stood and went to where Jayne was standing."
GL, this series is SWAI beyond belief. I know, I know...you say you've never done fic before, but, HEY! That just makes this all the more amazing, the quality of it, the shiny picture-painting with words, the most excellent character studies, and...the suspense? I could consume mass quantities of it the way you write it and never have enough. Get back to typing and posting the next part real soon, or else.
"“When. When she wakes up.” Mal said curtly." That was a good one. Made me make a girly scared gulp. *cuddles with her sean clone*
Simon was looking over some of Kaylee’s test results, hoping to find something he could work with, when he heard her.
OMG! Could it be??!
“Simon.” Her voice was so weak it nearly broke his heart. He turned to her and all doctor thoughts went out the window.
Here's where the tears started to well. Right when his heart started to break.
Even when examining his sister, Simon knew that there was something to be said for emotional detachment, but his brain and heart were certainly not connected at the moment.
I got a little confused..thinking about River..but I havent had sleep, so ignore this part. :P
“Kaylee? Kaylee can you hear me?” He bent over her, one hand stroking her forehead and hair while the other held her hand.
Tears are about to fall... I can so see this happening..*goes back to her brain movie*
Her eyes still closed she moved her head back and forth as if she were trying to force herself awake.
Can she be awake enough to speak to him? To let him know that she's semi-okay? Keep reading!
“Simon…Simon…don’t leave…please”
“I’m not going anywhere Kaylee. I’m right here.”
*cue Niagra Falls..the water works are broken and there is no stopping.* This just kills me everytime.
At the sound of his voice, Kaylee struggled to open her eyes and saw a very blurry Simon, but it was nonetheless, Simon. She smiled very faintly and looked at him. “Hey, you.”
Aw, just like the old Kaylee. "Hey You." *sniffle, tears* She can barely see, but it comfort her to know he;s there. AWw... I want a Simon!
“Hey, you too.” Simon’s smile was so broad Kaylee thought she was dreaming. “Missed you.” he said.
AWWWWWWWW *massive awww*
Kaylee smiled a little bit more and started to close her eyes again.
NOOOO!!!
“No, no, Kaylee. Kaylee? You have to stay with me. Stay with me Kaylee. You can’t leave me.”
Come on Simon! Keep her with us!
Kaylee opened her eyes wider and looked at him with a little more coherency. “Aw, silly, I’m not leavin’ you. I love you.”
Another classic Kaylee moment, she still has her sense of humour. "Aw, silly.." SHE LOVES HIM! *Niagra falls is back with a vengence*
Simon’s smile fell off of his face as he considered what she was saying. And then without hesitation he said, “I love you, too Kaylee.”
Without hesitation...AWW>..I want a Simon!
She smiled broadly and then her whole frame went alarmingly rigid and her eyes rolled back into her head.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!! (I think you get my point. ;) I'll be sending you daily encouragement. :P Im so excited, what a great Cmas prezzie! *hugs* :)
To be continued in part 6
You're evil and that's all there is to it. I must have more story and soon, please?
Worried Simon is so sweet. He just huffs around the infirmary and then breaks into tears.
Anod of course, the ever popular cliffhanger.
Post another soon!
...I rated it a 10.
Again.
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