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Am I pretty?

Friday, December 16, 2005

Stand-alone post "Pretty ... pretty". Contains slightly changed BDM spoilers, you'll get it when you read it. Six year old Leilah wonders if she's pretty.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3845    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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AN: This is a stand-alone, you don't have to have read my previous series to get it. I was originally gonna make proper stand-alones, but this little thing here with Leilah just creeped into my head and wouldn't come out. It's pretty much spoiling my idea on how I was gonna include the BDM into the plot, if you're patient enough for it, you can always wait until I write that series... if I will... I can't promise anything, I might just let you know the story of the BDM in flashbacks... There will be more series, but I want to clear my mind before that. Until then, enjoy my sporadic stand-alones.

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- She was makin' kissy faces at Aidan, Leilah exclaimed. - Ewwwwhttp://www...

- Like Aidan, the four year old murmured, completely trapping poor Aidan in her embrace.

Kaylee put her hand to her mouth, to not let out a high pitched giggle at the sceene, she threw a glimpse over at Zoe to see the first mate working on the same thing. The way Aidan was looking, there was no doubt he was his fathers son. The mechanic was gratefull that the doc had some work to be done up in the infirmary, or else he would have been covering his face with his hands.

- Awwww, don' you two look sweet, she cooed.

The girl grinned and used all her strength and weight to pull the boy down, proceeding to put a fully smack kiss on his lips. Zoe snorted and just couldn't hold it in anymore. Her daughter was even more forward than Kaylee and that was saying enough.

- It's not sweet.., her six year old replied loudly.

Leilah stomped off to her room, pouting. Stupid Ebony! Usually she loved playing with the younger girl, but right now she wanted her to be far away. Everybody loved Ebony, cause she was the baby, and usually that bothered her none. She had all the love and attention in the world, herself and didn't really mind sharing. Being a twin, you got used to sharing. So the boat had two princesses. Okay, so there was more like one and a half. Leilah didn't wear many dresses, she was always

Comments
Friday, 16 December 2005 02:29
AAAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWW MissK that was so adorable and I'm so in love with Leilah now. Aw aw aw. I'm gonna be awwing all night now.
Friday, 16 December 2005 02:35
That is soo cute!!!! You really feel for Leila!!
i like the end, that is so something River would do!! lol.
Nice work Kitten. Look forward to future stories.!!
Friday, 16 December 2005 02:55
This was just....not to be redundant, but aaaawwwww!!!! So loving Leilah she is such a sweetheart! And also, YAY, Wash!
Friday, 16 December 2005 03:01
Awww!! That's so sweet!!!I love how you wrote all of them.

Leilah is definately sweet. She seems like she's definately Kaylee's daughter. :)
Friday, 16 December 2005 03:04
I so loved what River did too!!! Write more please!:)
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 16 December 2005 04:20
awwww, so cute. love that wash survived--always hoped there was a chance! and i agree, leilah's a doll. would love to see more of her interaction w/mal....
-kaynara
Friday, 16 December 2005 04:42
awww that put a smile on my face at the end thats a good story Kitten
Friday, 16 December 2005 14:52
Terribly cute. The part concerning Wash and Leilah brought a tear to my eye...thanks for putting him in the fic.

WASH LIVES!!

:-)
Friday, 16 December 2005 14:52
Terribly cute. The part concerning Wash and Leilah brought a tear to my eye...thanks for putting him in the fic.

WASH LIVES!!

:-)
Sunday, 18 December 2005 07:17
WASH LIVES! And Zoe and Him have a baby named Ebony! How cute is that! I just stumbled upon this...sorry, Im so late. :)

I demand more missy! Or else!!!!!!!!!!! There arent enuf awww's in the verse for this.
Sunday, 18 December 2005 08:39
That was so cute. Very nice.
Sunday, 18 December 2005 16:36
i'm gonna make a horrible triumvirate (whoop! big word!) and be the third person to say...
WASH LIVES!!!!
love that he and leilah have a little connection, what with the blindness and the near-blindness thing...so cuuuuute!!! *CUTE COMA!!!!*

b
Monday, 19 December 2005 00:31
very cute!!!
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 23 January 2006 00:07
Hey I can say it to
WASH!!!!LIVES!!! see how i spiced it up with exclamation points see see!! I LOVE YOUR STORIES...its almost like having my favorite show back again you know the characters so well!!! and again...
WASH LIVES!!!! write more I totally like Leilah and I wanna know more about Aidan and the new development of Ebony!!! by the way this is CAT1620RD
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 03 February 2006 13:47
I love it! That is so totally amazing! Seeing Leilah all grown up now and knowing some of her backstory is awesome.

I think you should write a few of those pieces that explain her back story, they'd be very interesting, like the day she got the scars and all of those things.

She seems like despite the fact that she is a little Kaylee, she'd be a daddy's girl, and I think you should have a piece with Simon and Leilah, that would be awesome!

Great job, keep it up!

~Wanmei (forgot to sign in)~
Thursday, 09 February 2006 22:02
oh oh oh!! soooo shiny!!!! omg, it's great, seriously my fav. it's like that book, "Are You My Mommy?".

it's a little kid book. it's where this baby bird his mom leaves the nest before he hatches to go get some food so he tumbles out of the nest and goes around to the different animals and asks if they're his mommy and eventually he gets back to the nest and he finds his mom, and is all happy. it's a real little kid book, but so cute. it's so cute and this was just so shiny. it reminds me of that so much. leilah goes around asking "am i pretty" to all the crew instead of the little bird going around asking "are you my mommy" to all the animals. and it has a great lesson.

and i love the river thing, *nods* very nice. total awwwww moment.

keep flyin, this is a total ten.
EngineAngel
Sunday, 12 March 2006 22:52
Awww, this was so cute. I love the description of Aiden being his daddy's boy by being so cute. hee

I hope you plan to write this series you talk about above!

And River not saying anything, just drawing the flowers and then leaving was so perfect.

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