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Pretty ... pretty - chapter 24 - "Home For Christmas"

Monday, December 12, 2005

Final chapter in my Simon/Kaylee series. The entire crew of Serenity returns to Kaylee's homeworld for christmas. S/K, M/I, W/Z

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4259    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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AN: Here it is, the last chapter of "Pretty ... pretty". The story however will continue in an other story, I haven't yet decided completely on the name yet, but trust me that you will get to see a lot more of the twins. Keep commenting, this will help me to keep writing. Whether it's this particular story or other ones.

AN2: Thank you DancingRiver, CoatHanger, Aprilise, EngineAngel, manwithpez and Shorty for help with the secret santas :) Thanks Washie, EA & Gypsy for helping me shape the Mal/Inara sceene.

AN3: The lyrics are "Truly, Madly, Deeply" with Savage Garden.

AN4: Thanks ReginalRoadie for the idea of the "home development" of the photos.

AN5: Feel free to send requests my way for stand-alones as well as what you want happening in the sequels.

*** Home for Christmas ***

This wasn't how he had imagined it to be.

That was what was on Simons mind as he was laying on the bed, Kaylee sprawled on top of him, exhausted and sweaty. Just like him. He wanted their first time after the twins had been born to be special. Not that he complained about the events, it had definatly been amazing sex. And he loved feeling her body close to his in the afterglow. Welcoming the feeling of being upmost happy and satisfied, as he was running his hands through Kaylee's thick, soft hair, listening to her steady breathing.

The twins were closing in on turning three months now. Thinking about that it was amazing that they hadn't done this sooner. But then again there had been so many things going on that they never had a long enough alone moment to take advantage of it. From work-situations, all-nighters with crying and the exhaustion that just led to naps when they finally had a moment alone. If there was one thing he was sure of when it came to the twins was that he could never get himself to do anything that improper when being in the same room as them. It didn't matter if they were asleep or awake, it felt too weird. Luckily this was a properness that Kaylee actually agreed with.

So it

Comments
Tuesday, 13 December 2005 00:02
AWWWWWW This was adorable. I loved the whole thing and loved the gift for Regan Tam...

Keep up the great storywriting and can't wait for a sequel and side stories for this

April
Tuesday, 13 December 2005 00:55
That last bit was very well done, and it was a fitting end for a very good series. I'm now going to go off and write some more of my own.

As for future ideas, maybe you could do something similar to "Splainy Unkie Jayne" with the two bugging the hell out of Jayne or another crew member. Maybe we could see them in five years or so playing with Wash and Zoe's kid and having their own little adventures on the ship.

Or, if you want to keep the elder Tams in the picture, how about in 15 or 18 years or so, the twins decide to head out on their own and find their grandparents and discover part of their heritage.
Tuesday, 13 December 2005 01:09
Aww so sweet. You have been doing such good work with this.
Tuesday, 13 December 2005 01:31
Awww, excellent ending, though sad to see it end. Look forward to more stories from you.
Tuesday, 13 December 2005 02:19
misskitten I bow to you, this was such a great end to a wonderful series. You had me going 'aaaawww' all the way through. Beautiful writing, I'm look forward to sequals! Now if you'll excuse me I have to go find my Savage Garden cd, lol :)
Tuesday, 13 December 2005 03:13
Excellent job! I'm always impressed with your chapters. Hope you're working on your next series and will be able to let us all read it soon!:):):)
Tuesday, 13 December 2005 03:20
Awww, such a sweet way to end it. And sequels? Squee!

And BTW, you are NOT one to talk about keeping people waiting, missy. ;)
Tuesday, 13 December 2005 10:43
aaw!!! first christmas!!! *bawls* it's tears of happy, happy joy, honest!!!

b
Tuesday, 13 December 2005 23:02
How do you make me go AWW like this everytime! For 24 chapterS! I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! the longest of all!
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 15 December 2005 20:30
*sniffles* you done me proud. Cant wait to read more. That scene came together really well. Great job.
Monday, 19 December 2005 00:25
Awww, so lovely!!!
Really lovely story! :)
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 23 December 2005 20:27
My husband told me I should check this one out. So beautiful. Gettin' a bit teary-eyed at the last.

Great characterizations. Great job of revisiting plot points from the show from a fresh perspective.

You also did a good job of keeping plot threads throughout the entire story.

I also love how you are so responsive to constructive criticism and suggestions from feedback.

You may want to do a little more proofreading; nothing too glaring, but I'm an English major by trade and noticed some typos and misspelled words.
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 24 December 2005 03:25
thank you
Friday, 30 December 2005 02:31
Great job. Loved the gift exchange it seems like something they would do.
JOY
Thursday, 05 January 2006 09:54
great ending! i love the way you fit Mrs.Tam (senior) back into the story. It's such a kaylee thing to do, too, especailly after the way they hit it off in the dress shop.
Sunday, 12 March 2006 20:50
Aww, was it just a picture of the twins?
I'd love to see this continued! More of Regan's reaction and if she ever gets to meet the babies!

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