Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Pit Stop

Monday, December 12, 2005

Sequel to "Finding Trouble". Simon and Kaylee help each other clean up after Simon found himself greasy from his trip to the junkyard. *Adult Situations*

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2823    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimers: Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy own all characters. I'm just borrowing them for fun not money.

Author's Notes: Thank you for the comments on my prior stories. Like any author, I thrive on feedback. It's been a long time since I've written a sex scene, so bear with me. I have another one started, but I wanted to write this one first.

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Pit Stop

Simon had watched Kaylee clean grease and oil off her skin many times, but thinking about it now, he wondered why he never assisted her. He decided that tonight, he'd change that. The idea of helping her shed her coveralls appealed to him and made him almost forget that he wore equally filthy attire and was covered in the same dirt and grime.

"Whacha thinkin' 'bout?" Kaylee asked sweetly, catching a guilty gleam in the doctor's eyes.

"Perhaps the notion of getting out of these clothes."

Kaylee arched a curious eyebrow. "Anything else?"

"Maybe, but you'll have to wait and find out."

Kaylee's eyes widened with mock shock before she started to giggle. "I could getcha outta those clothes mighty fast." She reached for the snaps on his coveralls.

Simon snagged her arms in midair. "How about we take things one step at a time," he suggested. He clasped her wrist and led her to the tiny sink in the far back corner of the engine room. "Ladies first," he insisted as he unzipped her coveralls and pushed them off her shoulders, freeing her arms. Lathering up a washcloth, he began to wipe the dirt and grime from her arms. He tried to hide a chuckle as he wondered how she managed to get just as much dirt on her skin under her coveralls as on the protective clothing.

"Wha'so funny?" she asked, standing impatiently. She couldn't wait for her turn to coddle the doctor.

"Just curious, bao bei. How did all this dirt manage to get on your delicate flesh?" He traced the cloth up and down her dirty arms, watching her eyes shine with excitement.

Kaylee laughed. "I had to roll up my sleeves a few times 'ca

Comments
Monday, 12 December 2005 22:37
LOL! The ending...hee. And omg, that was HOT. Very nice.

I'll be in my bunk.
Monday, 12 December 2005 23:42
OMG, I'm FLUSHED! And LMAO LMAO LMAO at that last bit! BRILLIANT!
Tuesday, 13 December 2005 02:23
This is so cute! I'm not a Simon/Kaylee fan, I know it's canon, but what can I say...Anyway, you told it well! And Jayne walking in on them! Hy-ster-i-cal! And a touch of Rayne at the end. Love it!

One nitpic, though. At the end you have "this sister," when it should be "his sister." Damn typos!

Keep up the great writing.

"I love my captain."
Tuesday, 13 December 2005 11:13
Thank you for the comments.
Frelling Blonde - your comments and stories always make my day, either here or on LJ.
misskitten - glad you enjoyed it. I've enjoyed all the chapters to your story.
Lvs2read - thank you for reading even though S/K aren't your chosen 'ship. I appreciate the comment. And thank you for pointing out the damn typo. Duly fixed. ;)
I'm glad you all enjoyed the little bit at the end and the Rayne bit.
Friday, 16 December 2005 23:40
had to take a minute to work out what you meant by an "energetic Jayne" then the penny slo-o-wly dropped and i went "oooooooh!!!" good fic!!! i am SO glad you caved to peer pressure on this one...

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Saturday, 06 May 2006 01:10
Oh, this is an excellent fic! The sex scene was nice and hot! Are you still writing? I hope so because this was excellent!
Saturday, 13 May 2006 03:13
"I'll be in my Bunk"
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 13 May 2006 03:17
thanks so much for writing..this is just soooooo great!! love that Jayne walked in on them..LMAO

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