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<I>Serenity's</I> Hiccup - Part One

Monday, November 14, 2005

Set during "Out of Gas". A missing scene between Simon and Kaylee before they leave on their separate shuttles. Currently, this is part one of four.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2395    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Goodbyes

After Mal made his announcement, stating clearly that he was the only one staying behind with Serenity, Simon glanced over at Kaylee. She had attempted to argue with Mal, to no avail. She looked so sad, and he knew she not only blamed herself for their predicament but also for Zoë's condition, even though no one blamed her. He had observed Wash, taking a moment before Mal gave his final orders to hug the mechanic and whisper reassurances in her ear.

Once they were dismissed, the doctor leaned over to River and said, "Please go back to your room. I'll be there soon. You should grab a few things that you wish to take with you. I have something I really need to do before we leave." His eyes darted away briefly to watch Kaylee leave to go pack a few of her things.

"Don't be a dolt," River sighed, a welcomed smirk on her lips. She could have said many things but teasing her brother about his conflicted feelings always amused her and tickled her fancy.

"Don't worry about me, mei mei," Simon answered and ran down the hall towards Kaylee's bunk. He caught sight of her just as she was opening her door and called out to her, quickly closing the distance between them. "Kaylee! Kaylee, wait a minute!"

The mechanic looked back at Simon and managed to offer him a smile, but it could not hide the sorrow and remorse in her eyes. "I'm sorry, Simon."

"Sorry? For what? You didn't do anything wrong."

"For Serenity's hiccup. For hurting Zoë. For ruining your…"

Simon placed a finger across her lips to silence her unnecessary apology. "Don’t say it."

"But…but," she stammered, her lips quivering beneath his finger, "you didn't getta try none of your birthday cake."

"It looked delicious, and you sure surprised me. You know that as soon as all nine of us reconvene, I'm going to insist that you bake me another

Comments
Monday, 14 November 2005 03:30
lol, you stole my fic idea from right under my nose :) I might do one myself, but this one was beautifully done.
Monday, 14 November 2005 03:32
Aaaawwww! This was so good! Anything related to OoG usually makes me teary, but this is one of the best I've read. This definatly feels like it was a part of that ep. Great job and keep 'em coming :)
Monday, 14 November 2005 03:59
That was sweet.

And no, misskitten, that was MY fanfic idea. You just read my mind.

Gorramit... now I need an idea for Simon/Kaylee fluff..
Monday, 14 November 2005 04:39
Very very good! Please continue. Update soon.
PEULSAR5
Monday, 14 November 2005 05:14
Very well written, you captured their charachters beautifully. I cant wait for the next chapter.
Monday, 14 November 2005 05:55
That was so adorable! Can't wait to read Part Two!

~MeiMei
Monday, 14 November 2005 06:49
Nice. I always though OoG was missing a scene with them, especially given that they were getting awfully cozy the episode before. Well done.
Monday, 14 November 2005 16:20
aaaaaaaw!!!! squeeeeeee!!!!

b
Monday, 14 November 2005 17:04
I could so see a scene like this. Very shiny, thanks! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 28 March 2006 04:22
Ohh, most excellent. I was very upset S/K didn't get a moment in this episode. You captured what could have happened very well!
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 13 May 2006 01:32
I forgot to sign in when I read your other post..OMG!!! I am soooo excited about this..can't wait to read the rest!! WoooHooo!!!!..looks like I didn't sign in here eaither..LoL
Saturday, 13 May 2006 01:32
Here i am..all signed up...DUH!!!! LoL Out to read more...

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