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Ain't Our Kind

Monday, December 5, 2005

After the events of Serenity, Mal and Kaylee chat

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Title: Ain't Our Kind

Author: Sullen Siren (adena(at)direcway(dot)com)

Fandom: Firefly

Pairing/Characters: Kaylee, Mal mentions of Inara/Mal and Simon/Kaylee

Summary: "We're border-born. Grew up working ranches and engines. Wasn't about power or alliances or propriety – was just about surviving. All grew up knowin' if we lived a little better off than our ma and daddy did, we were doing pretty damn well."

Rating: PG

Disclaimer: I own nothing, sadly. I would really like my own personal Mal. But I don't. I'm just playing with Joss' babies and making no profit from it.

Feedback: Always adored!

Note: Spoilers through the Serenity movie! Thank you to musesfool for the Beta!

Ain't Our Kind

She was humming as she did the dishes, pulled back hair bouncing with her movements. It was irritating and it was endearing and that was more or less a constant state of being with Kaylee, Mal reflected. The table in front of him was dotted with gun parts and a battered hunting blade his mama had given him, before the cough and the medicine they didn't have any of took her down. They weren't none of them dirty, but he liked cleaning them. Gave him a calming effect.

When there wasn't humming, anyway. "Kaylee, I realize it's a bit like askin' a river not to run, but could you maybe, possibly, shut up?"

She grinned at him, cheerful as a gorram rainbow and sank into the chair opposite him. "Don't be so tetchy, Cap'n. What are you so grumpy about, anyway? 'Nara and you have another fight?"

"No. And what do you mean another?"

She smiled at him like he was the cutest, most adorable and clueless stray pup she'd ever seen. Which he wasn't. At all. He longed to roll his eyes. Wasn't anything least adorable about him. "Never mind Cap'n." She picked up the gun nearest her with the awkward touch of someone who knew guns, but still didn't like them. She studied the trigger. "Bet this catches," she told him, instinctively knowing what it needed, as she always d

Comments
Monday, 05 December 2005 10:16
This was a nice insightful peace and much as I don't want to imagine it, I can see the scenario that Mal envisages for Kaylee but I also think Kaylee is absolutely right. People can change, if they want to badly enough. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 05 December 2005 11:02
Soooo beautiful. You really took Kaylee and her strengths and made her downright amazing here. Standing up to Mal, defending her right to be hopeful and fearlessly tearing down all his excuses.

So she didn't actually change his mind, but she made clear what's her right to believe.

That, and the writing is lovely, with an attention to the smaller details and a great grasp on the voices.

I love it so much. Excellent.
ANA
Monday, 05 December 2005 13:23
I'm curious as to why Mal thinks that Kaylee wouldn't already know who Simon would choose. River is his sister. She knows that. She knew what he was capable of to keep River safe from the first day she met him.

I'm not saying Simon wouldn't agonize over it, if he was given no other choice. God knows, being put in that kind of position is enough to give anyone nightmares.

Mal isn't being fair to Kaylee, and he is most definitely underestimating her.

Oh, and the writing in this was wonderful. It's very honest in its outlook, and Mal and Kaylee's voices are dead-on.
Monday, 05 December 2005 16:43
I agree, you've got the voices dead on. Mal's cynicism is perfect, along with Kaylee's cheerfulness. I would really like to see a continuation of this. But I love S/K together, so maybe they could be together, break it off, (cause of differences) and then get back together. :)
Monday, 05 December 2005 16:58
This was wonderful. I love the Mal/Kaylee relationship. He would most certainly have misgivings about Simon and Kaylee being together. His dour insight into rheir future is something I can completely see Mal truly believing. Again, excellent job!!!
Monday, 05 December 2005 17:28
*sigh* mal, when will you ever learn? there is no way, short of duct taping her mouth and sticking her in the hold again that you will ever get kaylee to shut up and leave the doc alone...

b
Monday, 05 December 2005 22:15
Nicely done.

I most appreciate how your writing preserves the depth and complexity of the characters and character relationships. Their thoughts feel honest and unpolished, and the distillation from what they think to what they choose to say is very insightful.

I also appreciate how the details you've included add texture and context to the scene, without weighing it down.

Thanks for sharing.
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 08 December 2005 22:00
some of the best writing I've read in a while...thank you.
SUSANAH
Sunday, 11 February 2007 19:22
I see the Captain having this conversation but it says more about him and a certain Companion than Simon and Kaylee's chances.

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