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Survival Guide

Thursday, January 15, 2004

When confronted with Reavers, Jayne must look at the man inside, and Kaylee must look at the man beside her.

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Survival Guide

Chapter one

A Jayne Kaylee Story

By Belasera

NC-17, kiddies

A vague disclaimer is nobody’s friend: All recognizable characters, etc. belong not to me, but to Joss Whedon, Mutant Enemy, and Fox, and no money is being made here. The story, however, is mine.

Archiving: Sure, just tell me where it is so I can send my baby care packages with funny hats.

This is my very first attempt at fan-fiction, and will be a multi chapter story. It is already outlined, but I would appreciate any and all feedback, positive and negative, to help me flesh out the story as well as my meager capabilities allow. This is brought to you without beta, folks.

Spoilers for Objects in Space

Serenity hummed, sleek and solid as she moved through the black. Space knew no night or day, but inside the ship her occupants imagined that a sun had set somewhere and so they slept. Most of them anyway.

Kaylee wandered the ship, listening to her breathing, her heartbeat, wanting desperately to be reassured by it. But Serenity, her Serenity, had betrayed her, had opened up and let in violence. Kaylee shuddered a bit as she remembered, only a week ago…Early. It was irrational, she knew, to blame the ship, only her hull had always seemed so secure, so safe. Before. Now Kaylee couldn’t sleep. With a mind to have a cup of tea, she headed toward the kitchen and saw that she wasn’t the only one. Jayne sat hunched over the table, a shirt in one hand and a needle in the other. He attacked his task with the same sort of focused energy that Kaylee had seen him use to crack safes and neutralize explosives. The sight made her smile, and Kaylee stood for a moment, watching him chew his lower lip, before she entered the room.

“Heya.”

Jayne looked up at that as he pulled his needle through the cotton, it was obvious that she hadn’t startled him; in fact he had probably heard her coming from the engine room. It nearly made Kaylee blush to realize he had known she was staring at him, but Jayne wasn’t the type to make a fuss over t

Comments
Thursday, 15 January 2004 05:18
AWESOME job :) especially for a first fic!! *claps* excellently done...I just love the Jayne/Kaylee combo--my fave. You did them both great justice :)
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 15 January 2004 07:30
Ilove it - I love Jayne and Kaylee. Please, please, please write more. Beckett
Thursday, 15 January 2004 13:01
Woa...good fanfic. I've got this picture of Kaylee in my head now.... I like the way you ended this chapter by changing from the good afterglow to sudden terror. It really leaves the reader wanting more.
Friday, 16 January 2004 05:17
Wonderful, and i have to admit, uh, yeah, i'm jealous :P

More, please?
Friday, 16 January 2004 08:03
Ack! Where's the rest? Need more!
Actually, when they got to the lake, I had this picture in my of Jayne not knowing how to swim. lol Don't know why.
Anyway, MORE MORE MORE!!!
Friday, 16 January 2004 14:20
Squee- Regarding Jayne swimming, I had the same idea, thought it would be funny if he didn't know how to swim. But my desire to see him wet overcame any artistic integrity. Also, I don't think there is much in the 'verse that Jayne CANT do with his body. Thanks for reading!
ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 23 June 2005 22:04
Wow, I am impressed. Good job. Are you also serafina20? your cousin.
Friday, 02 September 2005 19:57
NOOOOOOO!!! NOT REAVERS!!! ANYTHING BUT THEM!!! *looks around in wide-eyed fear*

definitely SQUEE!!!! regardin' jayne/kaylee thingy...*sigh* i wonder what ELSE jayne can do...
Tuesday, 11 October 2005 04:33
Only reason it ain't a 10 is I wish there were more, longer horizontal mambo description. It's just me, and I know it, I'm pervy when it comes to wantin' delayed satisfaction. The longer delayed, the better, 'long as there is culmination eventually. Loved Jayne, loved Kaylee in this, needed the tender moment at the start there where Kaylee worked thru the evil Early's rape threats. Never thought it'd be Jayne who helps her thru that, but he did, and he did a dang good job through your wordsmithing. Liked Kaylee's first glimpse of Jayne's "nothing." LO Gorram L. He looked just like I wanted him to look. One last comment: Give us more, lest we die.
-Roving Eye.

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