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Sora

Monday, February 3, 2003

What happens when the crew of Serenity get three days leave planet side.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 5681    RATING: 9.0 (NC17)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Day one- Serenity

“Prepare for landing people,” Wash called over the com to the crew before switching it to Inara’s shuttle, “We’re atmospheric Inara, you’re good to go.”

Inara’s voice came back over the com, “Sheh-sheh Wash. Disengaging in three, two, one.”

“Disengaged, the Ambassador’s off.” Wash reported to Mal who was standing over his shoulder on the bridge. “We should be landing on Sora in less than three minutes.”

Mal nodded, “park a ways from town. Don’t need any locals sniffing around.”

“Can do Captain.” Wash replied without taking his eyes from the controls.

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Day one- Serenity

Shepard Book walked into Serenity’s infirmary where the resident doctor, Simon Tam, and his younger sister, River, normally were. Today was no exception. River was sitting cross legged on the counter leaning over a pad of paper drawing circles in varying shapes and colors. “Rings round thy fingers.” She whispered across the room to Simon who was gathering supplies together in a medical bag. She kept his gaze, looking at him as if she expected him to answer. Her eyes shifted back to her drawing, “twine evermore.” Simon watched her a moment as he tried to understand the meaning of her words.

“Hello Doctor.”

“Book,” Simon greeted as he turned around.

“Expecting some injuries on planet?” Shepard said after seeing the doctors case of supplies.

Simon went back to looking through the infirmary’s shelves, “No. Though I probably should. There does seem to be a pattern.”

Shepard stepped further inside the infirmary. “So Doctor… Do you and River have plans for today?”

Simon paused. “I, uh, well no. I need to go into town and see if I can trade some of these excess drugs and get some new supplies, preferably some more suited to treating gunshot wounds.” Shepard smiled knowingly. “Then I… I guess we’ll probably wander,” He said uncertainly. “Or come back to the ship.” After a pause, “You were planning to visit the local churches correct? Observe the native

Comments
Monday, 03 February 2003 20:33
I liked it. Just one comment and I've seen this in other fanfic. I can't imagine any circumstance where Mal would call Kaylee "little Kaylee" especially not to her face. I agree that he looks on her with fatherly or maybe big brotherly interest but he would never let her know.
Tuesday, 04 February 2003 00:01
First, thanks for writing a LONG Firefly fic! :) I surely enjoyed it, and hope you'll post more here for us. I giggled at Jayne's problem there at the end, and also winced at Mals newest injury. Good job. :)
Tuesday, 04 February 2003 10:51
I dug this. Nice and long.

Mal has called her "little Kaylee" before, to her face. The only one I can recall right now is in "Serenity," after she wakes up. She says, "Hey, captain," and he turns, sees her awake and I quote: "Hey, there, little Kaylee. What's the news?"
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 08 February 2003 18:52
Also in Bushwacked-
Mal: "You tell me right now little Kaylee, you think you can do this?"
(refering to the Revers trap)
Tuesday, 01 July 2003 05:22
This was great Kayt. Really cool story. The scenes were well done and kept all the characters involved on some level. I really enjoyed reading it all the way through. My only criticism would be that I am not sure you got River quite right. Maybe a little too much playful River for my taste. I look forward to more of this.
Saturday, 27 December 2003 21:13
Lovely. Thank you for writing this.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 09 March 2005 06:05
I really liked this. Keep writing!!!!

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