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Pretty ... pretty - chapter 18 - "Chance meeting"

Saturday, November 19, 2005

Eighteenth chapter of my Simon/Kaylee fanfic. Kaylee meets someone she didn't count on meeting.

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AN: I hope my characterisaion of Regan is to everyone's satisfactory. As well as the scenario she's put in. When I decided to give it a shot to make a short meeting between Kaylee and Regan I put Safe on and watched the flashback over and over again until I felt I had some sort of grasp on who Regan is. To keep as much surprise effect going I could for obvious reasons not put this note in the last chapter.

AN2: To Tan and Inge. Here's what I'm doing while you're over in UK talking to Sean and *sigh* Jewel. Wish I was there with you... who knows what kind of inspiration that would have given me... hopefully I'll not be guilted out of going on the next one... I *love* my mom and I understand why I can't go, but it doesn't change that knot in my tummy. Oh well, I hope you guys are having a wonderfull time and that I'll have a couple of more chapters for you when you come back. Please remember to do what you promised. Have lots of pictures for me.

AN3: Okay, this part continues immediatly after the last one. what more can I say? lol

*** Chance meeting ***

While Regan was signing whatever it was that needed signing, Kaylee was pondering the last name mentioned. Was this woman related to Simon and River? The more she thougth about it, the more she noticed the simillarities between the older woman and her husband and sister-in-law. And it made her wonder, could this maybe be Simon and River's mother? She thought back at Regan mentioning having two children, one of them a girl. But was she really..?

Regan finished up at the counter and glansed at the watch.

- Seems that I'm running late, she told Kaylee. - It was nice meeting you.

- You... too.., Kaylee muttered, as the woman went out the door.

Kaylee felt a stinging pain in her gut as she realized this was probably the closest she would get to Simons family. They would never know who she was. She felt even more bad for the baby growing inside her. Her daughter would never know that side of her family. A tear escaped her eye as she thought it. If

Comments
Saturday, 19 November 2005 03:47
Awww, very lovely chapter. Bittersweet about Simon and River not being able to let their mom know they're all right, but at least they've got a shiny (if rather dysfunctional) new family.

And before you ask, my next story will be up tonight or tomorrow morning. ;)
Saturday, 19 November 2005 03:58
Just great! Loved it, you really are a wonderful writer and I enjoy your story very much. More please, I will try to wait patiently, but not too much.
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 19 November 2005 04:36
I swear I am getting more and more pathetic by the minute I am logging on over and over just to see if you have a new story...and if you do I get as exited as I used to when I saw a Serenity commercial... well at least I have something to look forward to well... you are a truly amazing writer...
This is once again CAT1620RD when I get here i go straight to the bluesunroom
without stopping to log in first!
Saturday, 19 November 2005 04:36
aw cute--can't wait til the baby comes!
Saturday, 19 November 2005 06:45
Great Story!

I love Simon/Kaylee and little baby girl Tam. I wonder if Kaylee and Simon will find a way to let Mrs. Tam know her son, daughter, and granddaughter are ok. I can't wait to read more.

Saturday, 19 November 2005 07:19
(It's Piff again)

Tan and Inge better report here with pictures and long detailed stories with sean... *drool*

TO THE REVIEW--- LOL

I wanna hear about River and Simon's childhood! (I love little river.."We need to resort to cannabilism"...)

I loved this line the most out of the chapter: "listening to her other baby's steady hum"

Aw, cuz Serenity was her first baby. )

Ooh! Next chapter! It's a girl! Ooh! 10! As always. :D

Saturday, 19 November 2005 08:02
Huh. I was kinda expecting that their chance meet would lead to some sort of family reunion/clandestine operation. Bu then I guess it would be too much to ask for. Still, I like the whole internal dilemma of the whole thing and how it'll segway into Simon and River's childhood.

I thought your Regan Tam was a very good characterization.
Saturday, 19 November 2005 10:44
I love All your pretty ... pretty chapters!! I find myself logging on to the site primarily to see if you put up a new chapter!!
You are an amazing writer...
just dont leave me hanging I *neeed* MO'! SOoooN ;D

Saturday, 19 November 2005 13:34
Another great chapter. The baby is almost due! Whee!
I did feel sorry for Kaylee. I'm sure she'd want to hug Mrs. Tam and introduce her to her soon-to-be granddaughter, but I'm glad she didn't say anything to put Simon or River in harms way. Keep 'em coming. ;)
Saturday, 19 November 2005 17:16
aaw, poor simon...

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ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 19 November 2005 20:29
That's a quickminded Kaylee that didn't blurt it out, the way i would have. A GIRL! Are we going to have to wait 2 months to meet her? Are you taking polls as to names? I have a feeling River is going to know her name before anyone else does. . . .
Sunday, 20 November 2005 00:05
A 10 again. The only thing I think you could have done better...well just make it longer te he. Names? I kinda think you'll name her soleil but then again you could always name 'er serenity. Who knows We're looking forward to it.

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