Pretty ... pretty - chapter 17 - "Preparations"
Friday, November 18, 2005
Seventeenth chapter of my Simon/Kaylee series. It's time to get baby supplies. All I'm gonna say.
CATEGORY: FICTION TIMES READ: 3646 RATING: 10.0 (PG) SERIES: FIREFLY
AN: Here's a repeat of the comment I left after last chapter. The interview that Jewel says it is this one:
http://media.filmforce.ign.com/media/040/040380/vids_1.html; click on the link to firefly vids and you will see four interview pictures, click the "watch" link under Jewel and Adam's picture. Jewel says this: "...I'd like to see Kaylee have a baby, I think there needs to be a baby on the ship..." AN2: Kaylee's colorfull language from last chapter meant "Everything in space is stuffed up my ass" AN3: Anonymous, waking up your husband for a 4am kiss? LOL, that's funny. Glad to see that I have that effect? AN4: Finally one about this chapter. Thank you for the help to make a certain characterization believable, Inge. *** Preparations *** How Kaylee managed it, was beyond his understanding. The baby was kicking so hard at night it was waking him up. But despite his crankyness when having a night of little or no sleep, he wouldn't trade a single one of those moments. Kaylee looked so adorable there she was sleeping soundly, he leaned over and brushed his lip on hers, carefull not to wake her up. The baby kicked again, and he saw the promising aspect. Of course the baby would insist on having the opposite sleeping pattern than his, stubborn even before birth. He chuckled silently for himself. There were now only two months left. Time had moved so quickly, he felt as if he blinked he would find himself as a father. He started wondering how he would be like as a father, would he do a good job? Or would he end up in bad old patterns where he did or said something stupid and got Kaylee mad at him? He knew without a doubt that Kaylee would make a wonderfull mom. The way she was taking care of people, of animals, of Serenity. He grinned as he said it to himself. Kaylee would be the best mom, and he would probably struggle as a dad. He yawned all of a sudden and the change of pace in the baby activit
And of course you have to crank up the confusion factor by randomly throwing in Simon's mom.
I think this chapter is my favorite so far. Do you have a name picked out yet? Or should we start offering suggestions?
I need you to post the next chapter immediately. As Wash would say, "This is gonna get pretty interesting."
gypsylife I am right there with you! I check to see if a new chapter is up when I wake up in the morning, whenever I get a free minute near a computer, and at least 2 times before I go to bed! I'm desperate!
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I so love you right now! I have been hoping for one of your amazing chapters...and I find the best oen ever! continue...S0ON!!!!... this is CAT1620RD by the way I was just to excited to read this to log in first!
BUT!!! I love the A/N Chinese with Kaylee.LOL
I loved the cliff hanger ending! Simon and Kaylee are such a cute couple!! Here go the mass awwwws.. But could you put in another author's note where you get the chinese quotes from? Please..?
10!10!
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