Blue Sun Room FICTION - ROMANCE

Pretty ... pretty - chapter 16 - "Dilemma"

Wednesday, November 16, 2005

Sixteenth part of my Simon/Kaylee series, this one also focusing more on Mal/Inara. Inara tries to leave, but there are just things that keeps pulling her back.

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AN: Thank you Inge for working with me on that MSN convo. I hope the Mal/Inara bits throughout the story are to your satisfaction. Direct continuation from previous chapter.

AN2: Those of you wondering if my sisters pregnancy inspired the story, it really wasn't what did. I found an interview on the net where Jewel was asked what she wanted to happen in the future for Kaylee and she had said plain out that she wanted Kaylee to have a baby. And for some reason this story just started shaping.

*** Dilemma ***

After what felt like hours of crying, of begging herself to get the strength to finish what she started, there was a knock on the door. She knew immediatly it wasn't Mal, as out of everyone on this ship, he was the only one who didn't have the courtecy to knock before entering a room. Her reflection was a mess. Eyes red and puffy, her cheek showing clear traces of the salt from all the tears that had run down her cheek.

- Inara, Simon called from the other side of the door. - Are you there?

Out of everyone on the ship, she hadn't expected the doctor to pay her a visit. She quickly tried drying her face from the fresh tear streams, as well as stretching out the crumbled parts of her dress. When she looked presentable enough, she went and opened the door.

- Hey, she said, gently. - Anything I can help you with?

- It's Kaylee.., he started.

This immediatly worried her.

- Is anything wrong? Is Kaylee allright?

- She's having Braxton Hicks contractions.

- She...she's h-having contractions, the usually calm companion stuttered. - Now!?!

- Braxton Hicks... They're false labor, Simon explained. - Often caused by stress.

Inara sighed in relief.

- Yes, she muttered. - She hasn't had a shortage of that lately.

- I'd be feeling much better if someone sat with her, Simon continued. - Keep an eye on her.

- I thought you would want to do that yourself, Inara stated, surprised.

- I don't think she wants me there.

- What makes you so sure, she puzzled.

- On account that

Comments
Wednesday, 16 November 2005 03:46
That's so sweet! Aw, Mal proclaiming his love for Inara... spur of the moment, and so perfect for him.

That whole fight between Kaylee and Simon? Thank you it's not something serious! I can't stand another fight with those two (except your fic is nice and fluffy).
Wednesday, 16 November 2005 04:16
I swear you're getting better and better. I REALLY think you captured mal and inara very well here. they were in the moment and then it turns to a fight and then....wow. you done good. I really want to read more! I don't know how far you plan on taking this fic but I just want closure, but by all means make it 50 chapters if u want, just make sure we get some closure pleeese. Thank you.
Wednesday, 16 November 2005 04:35
I liked this. It's nice to see some other drama going on at the same time, as well as seeing the perspectives of other crew members towards Kaylee's pregnancy. And it's about time her hormones wreaked some mild havoc on her and Simon. Only natural.

Which interview with Jewel did she make that comment? I never heard that before.
Wednesday, 16 November 2005 06:07
SQUEAK!! Loved it so much! Mal and Inara have this great tension that makes for a really great storyline. This chapter was also very filled with emotion. Every character was vulnerable which isn't something that happens very often, especially with Mal and Inara.

Feed the hungry masses! Keep up the awesome work!
Wednesday, 16 November 2005 09:07
Awwww *applauds*

It's really great :)
And about the mns thing, any time :)(I love previews, how could I say no? :p)
Keep up the good work, hun!
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 16 November 2005 09:31
It's misskitten here, I just was too lazy to log in. Here's the link to the interview page. Jewel says it right there, when being interviewed with Adam.

http://media.filmforce.ign.com/media/040/040380/vids_1.html
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 16 November 2005 10:01
I'm sooooo in love with this storyline! Perfect capture of the "fine fine line between love and a waste of your time."
Now my problem is reality -
I don't get to read these until after my husband goes to bed, and the first thing after reading another great installment, I want a passion-filled kiss of my own! Yeah, apparently, guys don't like being woken up at 4AM for JUST kissing!
Keep up the great writing!
Wednesday, 16 November 2005 17:19
*snuggles crew* aaw, you guys...

b
Wednesday, 16 November 2005 22:56
Very nice last few chapters. I liked the Inara and Kaylee interaction. ;)
Thursday, 17 November 2005 00:17
Im here..Im here..Im just not supposed to be online..LOL

I love the Braxton Hicks contractions..and Kaylee's colorful language about Mild Discomfort..LOL and then the mal and inara relation ship. You totally have that down!! It feels like an episode...

QUESTION- What did Kaylee say in chinese that Inara said was colorful?..it sounded familiar... :)

ooh..next chapter..okay since you've had your couple days off.. Its time to get back to 3 chapters in one day! lmao! You know you love writing these LONG chapters... ;)
Thursday, 17 November 2005 04:25
Wonderful! I need more please!

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