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Pretty ... pretty - chapter 13 - "Nightmares"

Sunday, November 13, 2005

Thirteenth chapter of my simon/Kaylee fic. Slightly more angsty than usual. Kaylee's having nightmares of a certain Bounty hunter.

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AN1: Here are some replies to comments received on the last two chapters. When I made Jack and Rose Frye I based them a little on my own parents, when it comes to that warmth and including way of being. The open and straight forward nature I just assumed due to how Kaylee is herself. As to their reaction towards Simon after learning that their daughter was pregnant I had these things in mind. She's was old enough to ship out with Serenity, meaning she was ready to leave the nest nearly three years earlier. This means in their eyes she's an adult, yes she was a "whild child", but she was adult enough to make her own way. And therefor they shouldn't have much problems with her starting her own family. And as Jack and Rose started shaping in my head, I just couldn't imagine them any other way.

AN2: Someone pointed out that my last line where Simon ponders on River's crush on Kaylee's older brother and concludes that it could have been worse. That line doesn't repressent my view on the posibillity of a Jayne/River relationship. I can't give a clear answer on where I stand when it comes to them, it really has a lot to do with the story written. However Simon would have the world of problems with it. And as I was writing from Simons point of view, that last line just became natural to include. lol

AN3: Now here's a note related to this chapter... lol. It's time to answer the question on what happened when Jubal Early reached Serenity. I decided to write it in flashbacks, where all the italic passages are flashes to Jubal's visit. This will bring some angst to my fluff series, but there is no way I can write a decent chapter involving Jubal without angst and as I want to follow the show I have to include him. So you have been warned *hums dramatic music*...

*** Nightmares ***

- Have you ever been raped?

The question had all sorts of ice cold chills run down her spine. Her hand instinctively placed itself on her belly. Not that it would matter, should the man act on the threat. Of all things it got her

Comments
Sunday, 13 November 2005 03:40
Aw!!!

That was so sweet! Keep up the good work!

You turned a bad event into Simon/Kaylee fluff. That's so shiny!!!
Sunday, 13 November 2005 03:50
How do you keep writing so good... It is truly amazing. I like to think it is a girl too, but I guess thats up to you the amazing writer.
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 13 November 2005 03:50
nice job dealing with early.

love the simon kayleeness.
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 13 November 2005 04:07
Piffle, Im anonymous right now..But it's Piffle! :)

I loved the use of bao bei (cue massive aww) whenever Simon said it to Kaylee and It's a girl!!!! Hopefully..One can hope!

you handled the angsty stuff smothely (sp?) i enjoyed the chapter once again! I guess I can let you brain and fingers rest for a couple minutes since 3 stories in a day! :D
Sunday, 13 November 2005 04:13
This is a nice change in pace, as well as an interesting take of "Objects in Space" what with Kaylee being pregnant and all. Very well done.

And I just realized something. Jack and Rose. Are you a TITANIC fan?
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 13 November 2005 04:21
Wonderful wonderful! This story is just getting better and better. Are you going to try to do the movie, that would be kind of hard, but I think you could do it. Please keep up the quick updates. I love it when I come here and this story has a new chapter! ;)
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 13 November 2005 04:33
Ha. I like how everyone thinks it's a different gender. Out of curiosity, do you have a gender picked out, or are you gonna flip a coin when it gets to that point?
Sunday, 13 November 2005 19:40
early is EEEEEEEEVIL!!!! there. i said it. feel so much better now...

movie: agree with anonymous, think you could do it, and shinily too!!

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ANONYMOUS
Monday, 14 November 2005 01:26
Good stuff! Keep it up!
Just wandered across this one and I'm loving it. Especially the way you incorporate episodes.
S/K is my fave, this is some of the best S/K I've seen.
Monday, 14 November 2005 02:27
Wow. Lots of reading to catch up to where I last left off. Great job with all the last few chapters. You've been busy.

I like this chapter. One of my favorite episodes actually. There's just something about Early. I liked him as you can only like a good bad guy.

*hums along*

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