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Pretty ... pretty - chapter 12 - "Bon voyage"

Saturday, November 12, 2005

Twelfth chapter in my Simon/Kaylee series. It's time to leave the Fryes.

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AN: I have a confession to make, I had written this chapter before I got many comments on the last one, so I held it back a couple of hours until a few more comments found its way here. So just so you know people, commenting instead of just plain reading, really pays off in how quickly I add the next installment. They are also great help in determining where to take the story next.

*** Bon voyage ***

It was with heavy hearts that they said their goodbyes with Kaylee's family, who even after just three days of knowing them felt a lot more like home for Simon than his own had done his whole life.

Not only had the welcomed him into their family as their son-in-law and the soon to be father of their first grandchild. They had listened closely as he had told the story about River and the Academy, how he was now and would most likely always be on the run. It didn't seem to bother them a tiny bit that he was a wanted fugitive. In fact they had focused so much on the part where he had risked his job, his life for his sister, that they took an even greater liking to him. For them the family came first, the law second, which of course was the only way they could be. They knew very well that most of the jobs their daughter either directly or indirectly got involved with was far from legal. Mal had been straight with them on that from day one.

On their second day at the Frye residence River had come to visit. Rose had immediatly taken the girl to her, as if she was her own daughter and made it her goal to get some meat on her tiny body. River, who at best was cautious with new people, lit up at Rose's hospitality and didn't even pay attention to her brother, who she usually seeked as an anchor in these sorts of situations.

Even when River had a small anxiety fit, brought on by unknown reasons, Rose handled it superb. She had firmly placed her hands on both of Rivers shoulders, demanding eye contact and then asked River calmly if she wanted to help out with dessert. When Simon had objected, imagining his sister

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ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 12 November 2005 22:10
Whew. I was wondering how you'd deal with the "by the way, my new hubby and his sister are #1 and #2 on the Alliance Most Wanted list." Well done.

I'm guessing from the last line you're not really a Rayne fan, eh?
Saturday, 12 November 2005 22:11
That anonymous was me, BTW. I swear I can't manage to stay logged in for more than 5 minutes here....
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 12 November 2005 22:23
Lovely lovely! Please keep it coming quickly. This is one of my favorite stories. You are doing a great job. Update Please! Now! How about Now? Please!
Saturday, 12 November 2005 22:31
"- Beauty is the phenomenon of the experience of pleasure, through the perception of balance and proportion of stimulus. Involves the cognition of a balanced form and structure that elicits attraction and appeal towards a person, animal or inanimate object, River stated matter-of-factly. - It isn't relevant."
LOL!!!! wonderful, as always.

Saturday, 12 November 2005 23:47
I like this. I'm wondering if you would find some way to weave in the elder Tam's into this. Simon met her in-laws, now I'd like to see her meet his. I know I'm dealing with this already in YCGHA (which I swear I'm working on the next chapter and will try to have it up as soon as possible. I have two essays and half a journal to work on), but I'd like to see it from your perspective.

ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 13 November 2005 00:23
Loved it. I would like to see the tam-in-laws as well. I would really love to see some layers to the storyline. Like their next job goes awry(cause that never happens lol!) and kaylee gets kipnapped or simon hurt, whatever you do I'm sure you'll do well. Look forward to more....I commented so you post..:-)
Sunday, 13 November 2005 01:47
that was great I love these so hurry up and write another I am looking forward to them every day! (but if you need more time goo right ahead)
-I wanna see my gran'child 'fore he starts walkin'
was that a hint as to his gender?
Sunday, 13 November 2005 03:15
Uh huh..and you say persistance doesnt pay off! Me buggin you all day yesterda got these two chapters here!!

I loved the River interaction! And how she and robbie were crushing on each other! Then Simon saying how it could've been Jayne! Ha! Take that River/Jayne shippers!! Muah ha ha!

Sorry, Im a traditionalist. So... new chapter! new chapter! new chapter!!!!!!! Lovin it!
ps...make it a girl baby...
Sunday, 13 November 2005 19:16
When Simon thought about it, his sisters first crush wasn't all that bad, after all it could have gone a whole lot worse. It could have been on Jayne.

believe me, i'm all FOR rayne stories, but that was just funny!!!

b

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