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Pretty ... pretty - chapter 11 - "Home sweet home"

Saturday, November 12, 2005

Eleventh chapter of my Simon/Kaylee fic, another long part. Kaylee introduces Simon to her family.

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AN: Yes, here's yet another long chapter, I don't know how you keep making me do them this long, but they just won't end so quickly longer... lol. You wanted to know how the meeting with Kaylee's family went, well here it is. Enjoy. And as always... COMMENT! ;)

*** Home sweet home ***

It had been a pretty good week for Jack Frye. His shop had two ships in for repairing, pretty thorough work needed to be done, which would bring some extra coins on the table. Someway, no matter how scarsely work had come, he had always made ends meet. But it felt good to have some extra, now that his youngest was coming home for a few days. The wave had arrived a week earlier where the captain had notified him they were swinging by. They had not arrived yet, but Jack never worried, probably been caught up with yet another mission. Instead of checking the cortex every minute to see if another wave had come, like his wife did, he placed himself under the engine, hoping to have the job done by the time they arrived.

- Daddy, a familliar voice said from the doorway and Jack hurriedly hoisted himself up from underneath it.

There she stood, his baby girl, all grown up. It was a rarity of her to be on this part of the 'verse, last time had been the first christmas after she had shipped off. The captain had planned it to just be Kaylee dropping off for a couple of days, then he had found Serenity to be landbased. Kaylee had never openly admitted doing it, but they all knew she had been responsible. The crew had ended up spending christmas with her folks and had a wonderfull time. That was close to a year and a half ago. And now she was finally back, lighting up the shop with that radiant smile of hers. She threw her arms around him, he lifted her up and spun her around.

- Baby girl, he whispered into her ear. - Good to have you back.

- Good to be back, she replied, hugging him tighter.

He finally let her back down and stepped back to take her into perspective.

- I ain't convinced Mal's feeding you properly on that b

Comments
Saturday, 12 November 2005 05:15
cute... very great I swear you just keep getting better...and so fast to I logged in today and got all excited seeing chapter ten then a couple hours later I saw chapter 11, I just love your writing! keep them coming. (not to put pressure on you or anything!)go as slow as you need. can't wait to see what happens next!!
Saturday, 12 November 2005 15:30
This is great!!!

I love all of these! Please continue with more! I can't wait!
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 12 November 2005 19:44
Sure you can go as slow as you want, just so long as you do it quickly. lol great story, i can really see how from ch 1 on to 11 you've gotten better and better. I keep comin back.
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 12 November 2005 19:52
Wonderful! More More! Please update really really soon. I need my fix!
Saturday, 12 November 2005 21:34
Wow, Kaylee has some understanding parents. I know if I'd gotten my wife the way Simon has, her father would have killed me on the spot. I like it!
Sunday, 13 November 2005 03:03
Im here! To review!
LOL At the akwardness with Bester mentions. and also at Simon being all proper with the kaylee's family...

and I had the biggest laugh and the best time reading why Kaylee and Cider go together... LMFAO Stark naked having a conversation with the stars!!

But..I see Chapter 12 waiting! To the next one!! and see? we all Lurve the long chapters and when you post three chapters in day! LOL
Sunday, 13 November 2005 18:26
stars ain't the best for conversationin'...love it!!!

b
Monday, 21 November 2005 17:57
These are great. I can't stop reading.
WOW, just WOW

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