AN: I know, you probably wanted the wedding night, but I'm no FrellingBlonde, allright. I don't think I would be able to write a decent wedding-night, not without help anyway. And when I say decent, I of course mean smut. I don't do smut well, it's the thing I love to read, but can't write... lol. So, I was watching "Heart of Gold" today and there were just bits of things happening there that I realized I had to include in my story, as well as doing some modifications to adapt the storyline. So here's my version of "Heart of Gold", from Simon and Kaylee's point of view. The sceenes with other people that I haven't mentioned happened the way they did, with the exception of Wash and Kaylee being attacked at Serenity, cause I can't very well have Kaylee being two places at once... lol, so just imagine Wash managed the thing himself, ok?
AN2: COMMENT people, I give short chapter, you comment, I give you long chapter, you especially comment!
*** Practice Run ***
Simon was still getting used to waking up with the warmth of another body snuggled up to his. His hand sneaked down to touch the now slightly more curved belly. It was barely noticeable for him, when he had her this close, so he knew it wasn't obvious for others yet. He figured that was for the best, now as they were heading to see her parents. Best thing was to break one part of the news to them first and letting them get used to it. Captain had promised them a full weeks stay, the last job they had was enough to keep them for a while, so they could take their time. He had to admitt he was feeling anxious, this would be the first time he met Kaylee's dad and he had both married his daughter without asking for his blessing, as well as getting her pregnant. He feared what might happen should the events be presented to his father-in-law the order they had happened.
Kaylee was obviously dreaming nicely, as she sighed and snuggled closer up to him. Simon wrapped his arms around her and kept her close. He wanted to drift back to sleep with her, she seem
( I feel a long review coming on...)
I loved in the beginning, the puppy love between them. And then Mal's like Are you decent? Not even. LOL
*snort* And you even included the boy whore notion!!
Its also cool how you can twist the story to fit your plot and it still seems like it could/did happen.
Another *snort* when Petaline almost broke Kaylee's hand! ;)
I need the next chapter!! (Long please.. :) I just love em! 10!
For some reason, that turn of phrase just cracks me up. Well done.
And extra kudos to Wash, taking down 3 armed bandits on Serenity all by himself. I knew he was a manly-man deep down inside.
Won't be getting the grin off my face for quite a while.
The whole story is aw-inspiring. :)
Reading these just makes me happy. :) Please continue! You rock!
Can't wait to see what happens when Simon meets Mr. Frye, and I shudder to think what will happen Jubal Early stops by.
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