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Pretty ... pretty - chapter 10 - "Practice run"

Friday, November 11, 2005

Tenth chapter in my Simon/Kaylee series, yes it's another long one. Simon has to deliver someone else's baby.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3470    RATING: 10.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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AN: I know, you probably wanted the wedding night, but I'm no FrellingBlonde, allright. I don't think I would be able to write a decent wedding-night, not without help anyway. And when I say decent, I of course mean smut. I don't do smut well, it's the thing I love to read, but can't write... lol. So, I was watching "Heart of Gold" today and there were just bits of things happening there that I realized I had to include in my story, as well as doing some modifications to adapt the storyline. So here's my version of "Heart of Gold", from Simon and Kaylee's point of view. The sceenes with other people that I haven't mentioned happened the way they did, with the exception of Wash and Kaylee being attacked at Serenity, cause I can't very well have Kaylee being two places at once... lol, so just imagine Wash managed the thing himself, ok?

AN2: COMMENT people, I give short chapter, you comment, I give you long chapter, you especially comment!

*** Practice Run ***

Simon was still getting used to waking up with the warmth of another body snuggled up to his. His hand sneaked down to touch the now slightly more curved belly. It was barely noticeable for him, when he had her this close, so he knew it wasn't obvious for others yet. He figured that was for the best, now as they were heading to see her parents. Best thing was to break one part of the news to them first and letting them get used to it. Captain had promised them a full weeks stay, the last job they had was enough to keep them for a while, so they could take their time. He had to admitt he was feeling anxious, this would be the first time he met Kaylee's dad and he had both married his daughter without asking for his blessing, as well as getting her pregnant. He feared what might happen should the events be presented to his father-in-law the order they had happened.

Kaylee was obviously dreaming nicely, as she sighed and snuggled closer up to him. Simon wrapped his arms around her and kept her close. He wanted to drift back to sleep with her, she seem

Comments
Friday, 11 November 2005 19:34
Another fabulous chapter, doll. And as for your author's note...awww, you're making me blush! *g*
Friday, 11 November 2005 19:38
*sniffle* there go the waterworks. again.

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Friday, 11 November 2005 19:46
Massive AW! I freaking love these long chapters to death!!

( I feel a long review coming on...)
I loved in the beginning, the puppy love between them. And then Mal's like Are you decent? Not even. LOL

*snort* And you even included the boy whore notion!!

Its also cool how you can twist the story to fit your plot and it still seems like it could/did happen.

Another *snort* when Petaline almost broke Kaylee's hand! ;)

I need the next chapter!! (Long please.. :) I just love em! 10!
Friday, 11 November 2005 20:06
"..this would be the first time he met Kaylee's dad and he had both married his daughter without asking for his blessing, as well as getting her pregnant. He feared what might happen should the events be presented to his father-in-law the order they had happened."

For some reason, that turn of phrase just cracks me up. Well done.

And extra kudos to Wash, taking down 3 armed bandits on Serenity all by himself. I knew he was a manly-man deep down inside.
Friday, 11 November 2005 23:22
This is just so great.
Won't be getting the grin off my face for quite a while.
The whole story is aw-inspiring. :)
Saturday, 12 November 2005 01:42
Another fantastic chapter!!!

Reading these just makes me happy. :) Please continue! You rock!
Saturday, 12 November 2005 02:46
See, if that actually happened in the real episode, it would have been a better ep. O fall the individual eps of FIREFLY, "Heart of Gold" I always felt was the weakest. But this new, alternate perspective helps make the overall story better.

Can't wait to see what happens when Simon meets Mr. Frye, and I shudder to think what will happen Jubal Early stops by.
Saturday, 12 November 2005 02:47
One question... is Kaylee's baby gonna be a girl or a boy? ... well... another great amazing chapter!! I have never read fanfics before this and now suddenly I find myself logging on every day to see if you wrote another installment keep them going please write another soon!

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