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Pretty ... pretty - chapter 7 - "What did you just say?"

Monday, November 7, 2005

Seventh chapter of my Simon/Kaylee fic. This is the chapter you've all been begging me for. So you *better* comment!

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AN: Yes, it's finally here. Simons reaction to Kaylee's news. Like I said in the summary, you guys *better* comment!

*** What did you just say? ***

- I'm pregnant, Kaylee said, her eyes carefully studying his reaction.

Okay, that was as far from his mind as humanly possible, as he had been listing up what could possibly be wrong. When he thought about it all over again he was surprised he hadn't spotted the symptoms. He was medicine wiz, top three percent and this took him by surprise. Maybe he deep down had suspected it and never dared to bring it up? No... he couldn't even buy that himself. He had been completely blind to this. Maybe because he was sure at some level that Kaylee was his.

When he first had gotten onto Serenity he had been sure she was with someone, because how could anyone as sweet as her not have somebody. As he had remained in this belief he had kept his distance, refused himself to fall. Then he had to give in and fall, and this had to happen.

- And the... father, he croaked. - Do you love him?

She seemed a bit taken back by the question, then she silently pondered it for a couple of minutes.

- Yeah, she answered. - I do.

The words were painfull for him to hear. This had to be the hardest time to back away. And yet there was one question left he had to ask.

- Who is he?

- You.

- I'm sorry... what, he asked, not sure he heard it right.

Kaylee just looked at him, studying his every move... She bit her lip slightly, like a little girl caught doing something she shouldn't be doing. Simon sunk down onto a chair, not taking his eyes off her a second. That one word had him paralized. He hadn't let the news sunk in yet, he was now, more than ever afraid of saying the wrong thing. Why did he have to have such a talent for it. He wanted to ask when, why couldn't he remember something like that? When could something like that have happened without him remembering? He thought about it hard for fifteen whole minutes. His expression unchanged. Then it hit him. It was li

Comments
Monday, 07 November 2005 06:52
OMG! You are the best freaking writer ever!! And Im the first to review!

Nice way to put the Canton night together and make it fit, and Simon's reaction then Kaylee hushed him... Aw, you really remind me why I love Kaylee and Simon fic!

Another Aw, how he kissed her temple and tucks her in..

Great way to end the story!! And I want MORE!!! Beware of angry mob of readers who want more!! 10!
Monday, 07 November 2005 13:35
ooooooh there had better be more!
Monday, 07 November 2005 13:46
it's cute. i like.
so norway eh?
you're the first scandihooligan i've seen here.
i'm from denmark. keep writing. keep the signal going.
Monday, 07 November 2005 14:14
I like this a lot. I'm kinda dealing with this as well with YCGYHA, but later on. It's nice to see the intital reaction to the news that Simon and Kaylee were now going to be parents.

Peace
Monday, 07 November 2005 15:10
Great!

I like Simon's reaction wondering if it's his. How he was sad that (as he thought)Kaylee had been with someone else.

Everyone else has said this, but CONTINUE!
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 07 November 2005 16:56
more, more, more!
Monday, 07 November 2005 18:01
Awww, squee. This part made me smile like a moonbrain. Can you just imagine how cute Simon and Kaylee's baby would be?
ARMYGUY
Monday, 07 November 2005 19:44
for the love of god please finish the story. soon!!!!!!!!!!!!
Monday, 07 November 2005 19:46
eew. puke kiss.

but other than that, so incredibly sweet my teeth are rotting just reading this

b
ANONYMOUS
Saturday, 12 November 2005 12:36
This story keeps getting better and better
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 15 November 2005 02:53
I can't stop grinning! That's the cutest thing that he kissed her even after throwing up! Yucky but cute!

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