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你咬住我-Bad things happen....when Jayne gets creative

Monday, November 7, 2005

Bored and waiting to 'git goin', Jayne Cobb works on a project that will yield more for him than anyone.... but what happens when things out of control goes a wee bit astray......

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A Jayne Cobb piece for ya. (POSSIBLE SPOILER ALERT IF YOU HAVEN'T SEEN THE MOVIE!!! You have been warned!)


There is no BUCKY AND BOB. Sowwies....................





Fall

2518

January 2nd

Onboard Serenity

(Written by Blake)




"Oh yeah." His characteristic gruffish-chortle was soft, but present all the same. Standing a top his bed, arms up over his head, he pushed forth a long line of silver, ribbed tubing. Etched and tarnished, aged but strong. It was even flexible in most of the right spots and for the price he paid, that was good enough. Wiggling his right arm, a snag was hit somewhere up in the duct of his ceiling where he was feeding through the fat wire.

He'd been working here and there on restoring this contraption for the past two weeks. In fact, if Jayne Cobb had to give praise where praise was due, he would say this was one of the most productive passing of time he'd ever done. Some wasted wages, at least in a time past he'd call it that, but today he called it well-spent genius. He was about as good as the Doc right now.

His developing of the contraption to distract himself from the sour moods of others was working, not that Jayne didn't feel a bit of his own discouragement based on recent weeks. The death of another man didn't mean much to him prior to getting on with Serenity, and now with Mal, Simon, River and well, yeah, mostly Mal, showing him each and every step about a new path. Book would call it righteous. There were other ways to label a man but only one came to mind: Loyal just was never a word good to describe Jayne Cobb, unless it was looking out for that number one.

Damn that Mal.

Damn Wash and damn the Preacher.

Back to thinking on his special project, Jayne turned his thoughts to self-genius once more and mentally pa

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ANONYMOUS
Monday, 07 November 2005 03:04
Very easy to imagine Jayne doing something so naughty! Love the bit where he bangs his head on the cabinet!
Monday, 07 November 2005 03:16
Thanks so much. I have fun with Jayne n Wash... although I have to admit that Wash is a bit of a fav. of mine.

-Blake
Monday, 07 November 2005 03:22
The song was the best part. Write the rest of it and post it in filks.

The whole thing was good, too. Where was he sending the camera anyhow?
Monday, 07 November 2005 03:23
Heheee.... now to tell you that would spoil what's to come... doesn't it?



I'm new. Today's my first day. What is filks?

Thanks for the feedback. gotta love it

-Blake
Monday, 07 November 2005 03:29
*giggle* Oh, that was so wonderfuly devious of Jayne. I can totally picture him doing that too.

Wonderful! I can't wait for more.
Monday, 07 November 2005 03:45
Thanks so much!! I'm a wee bit partial to his little "Oh gimme a home" myself... bad writer! Bad writer! But so glad you like it. Please read more and/or give me the link to your fav. piece. I'd like to return the favor or feedback.

-Blake
RIVERMEIMEI
Monday, 07 November 2005 06:12
Why is it you're either making me giggle or cry?

Hehe! I love your Jayne. I could never fathom what that man is thinking (it scares me to be honest...poor River)so go you and being all Jayneeeish. <---That’s a word, I swear.

Monday, 07 November 2005 10:21
Very funny! Maybe Book's God was keeping an eye on Jayne's weakness. Whatever, I think he would have risked a few Special Hells to get an eyeful. Chuckle. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 07 November 2005 18:34
"Sometimes it was better to blame others than blame yourself. If you could get away with it."

a man after my own shrivelled, devious heart...

b
Wednesday, 09 November 2005 06:00
RiverMeimei - I'm sorry. Not trying to make you cry!! (but laugh.. GUILTY AS CHARGED!!)

AMDOBELL - THAT could very well be... heheeee....

Bellona - You have a devious heart eh? Uh oh!! :: ducks :: Merci!!

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