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TEMPTATION SERIES: 33. "Drawing the Line"

Saturday, November 5, 2005

"Wash has some reservations. River decides to tell Simon a few home truths. Chung-li and the crew of Serenity get an unexpected shock on Glory."

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4522    RATING: 10.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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TITLE: "DRAWING THE LINE"

AUTHOR: Alison M. DOBELL

FANDOM: "FIREFLY"

PAIRING: Kaylee/Simon.

RATING: PG-13.

STATUS: SEQUEL to "ACCEPTABLE LOSSES"

ARCHIVE: Yes. Just let me know where.

FEEDBACK: Welcomed.

EMAIL: AlisonMDobell@aol.com

WEBSITE: http://carlajane.50megs.com/Ali00.html

SUMMARY: "Wash has some reservations. River decides

to tell Simon a few home truths. Chung-li and the crew of

Serenity get an unexpected shock on Glory."

The usual disclaimers apply. The characters and 'Firefly'

are the property and gift of Joss Whedon and Mutant Enemy.

No infringement of copyright is intended.

"DRAWING THE LINE"

"Firefly" story

Written by Alison M. DOBELL

* * * * *

It was early. They were still a couple of hours from Glory but Wash knew folk would be stirring real soon. He wanted to be up before the Captain came bellowing into their bunk for him, not that he took much notice of the macho posturing or bull frog impressions. Mal would be uptight enough what with the funeral to come and seeing his friends on Glory under such sad circumstances. Mayhap him and Zoe wouldn't take the baby down to the planet with them. After all, someone would have to stay with the ship. As if reading her *zhangfu's* thoughts Zoe spoke and stirred in the same heartbeat. Wash figured it must be some kind of womanly gift.

"It'll be fine, Wash."

He acted as if he didn't know what she was talking about. "*Shenme*?"

Zoe smiled, the curve of those lush lips making him go weak at the knees and just about everywhere else. The kiss eased the tension out of him quite a bit but he still didn't want to chance anything happening even on a peaceable world like Glory. "Cap'n said Rafe an' his people were real excited to meet the crew again especially the newest edition."

"He's not an *addition*," Huffed Wash. "He's our son."

"*Zhenjing xialai, zhangfu*. We'll be among friends, what could go wrong?"

He could

Comments
CUB
Saturday, 05 November 2005 02:00
I don't know if I've ever mentioned this, Alison, but you're an excellent writer - regardless of subject or genre. You're definitely good enough to make money doing it, if you don't already.
MAI
Saturday, 05 November 2005 09:56
And yet another nasty turn for the crew. I want to know that happens next and yet I don't. I have to agree with Cub you should defintely write your own book. You have a rare talent for writing these vivid, dramatic stories.
Sunday, 06 November 2005 00:52
Damn. I loved how you wrote "idyllic". And the no-longer-mute girl? Damn.
Been taking 'no character is immune' lessons from Joss, huh?
Sunday, 06 November 2005 10:11
No, I don't write professionally Cub and Mai but I am writing a book - a trilogy. At first draft stage with book one but won't approach a publisher till the whole shebang has been finished, polished and rewritten to a shiny big sparkle. Probably looking at a couple of years till it is all done and dusted. Thanks for all the shiny comments. And artships, I bow before the mighty Joss just remember not everything you see and hear and touch is what you think it is. Keep Flyin- - Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 09 November 2005 11:51
OMG. What a terrible shock for them all.

Great scene between K/R/S BTW.

And I really liked the pithiness of "the 'verse had a wicked sense of humour and an even blacker notion of timing." How true, how very true!
Friday, 04 November 2011 05:15
Aaaaaaa no!!! That can't happen to Glory!!! D': what about little Rose(I think that was her name)?... shiny writing!!!

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