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The Death of Wash

Friday, November 4, 2005

Wash's last moments.

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With my head turned to the side, I never saw it coming. The window shattered. My seat jostled. Something large, heavy, and black protruded from my chest. The moment was so instantaneous I never had time to react; nor did I have time to feel any pain. My internal organs shut down. My heart stopped pumping. My brain reeled as the blood no longer flowed.

They say earring is the last thing to go. I knew something was wrong then, when the only thing I could do was listen. My wife’s beautiful panicked voice filled my ears as she called out my name. I wanted to comfort her. I wanted to move and get out of this seat. It tormented me to be so helpless amidst such danger. But even her voice began to fade. And that’s when I saw the light.

What a light it was—so pure and boundless. It came from above and pulled me away from my body. As I looked back, I saw with breathtaking clarity and detail the result of my adventure. The Captain pulled my wife away, and together they disappeared from the cockpit. By now, my torment and confusion was gone. I relaxed into the light and was absorbed. I no longer had any questions. I felt like I knew everything. I no longer sensed pain or danger. There was only love. No need to weep for me, I thought—the light becoming brighter and brighter. We will be seeing each other soon enough; because the sky stretches farther than we ever thought. And nothing will ever take that away from us.

((Wrote this in 30minutes. Sorry, was pressed for time.))

Comments
Friday, 04 November 2005 21:57
"the sky stretches farther than we ever thought. And nothing will ever take that away from us."

I want this on a t-shirt.
Friday, 04 November 2005 22:01
I want that on a shirt too!. How beautiful
BELLONA
Friday, 04 November 2005 23:00
hello, kleenex?

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ANONYMOUS
Friday, 04 November 2005 23:35
Fix the "earring" typo and it'll be perfect.
Friday, 04 November 2005 23:36
Spoiler much?
KATS
Saturday, 05 November 2005 00:39
Nicely done !!!!!!!!!!!!!
Saturday, 05 November 2005 01:00
Loved this - sniff - still miss Wash. This was beautifully written and gave a feeling of hope too. Nicely done! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 05 November 2005 02:20
VERY nice! Kinda how i imagined it. If you look on wash's face when zoe calls his name, his eyebrow furrows just a little bit, then he falls over. Nice meshing with the movie!
FLOATINGCHANDELIER
Saturday, 05 November 2005 07:08
I am *this* close to crying. Really. I was so upset when Wash died, and cried for Zoe then, I swear...So sweet. The last two lines were brilliant, but you've already been told.
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 13 November 2005 00:37
I wanna cry all over again!

Sniff!
Sunday, 13 November 2005 00:37
Sniffles
Wednesday, 30 November 2011 03:24
annnnd now im crying "thanks alot buddy ":) i loved it want a shirt pleeze :) <3

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