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Crop Circles -- Five

Friday, November 4, 2005

Shepherd's Walk

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 2495    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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After leaving Jayne at the edge of town, Shepherd Book continued through the heat, following Flaherty’s directions. While Book had been many places in his life, he wasn’t sure if he remembered one as hot as this. “Lord, Jesus,” he thought as he inhaled. “Walk with me,” he thought as he exhaled. He repeated this a few times until the heat became more tolerable. Thankful for Kaylee’s parasol and the shade it provided, Book started wondering how people survived on a place like this, day after day after day. It was a mining moon; there was little vegetation and little rain. It would be a very hard life.

Finally, Book arrived at what was obviously the town’s meeting hall. It was not built at street level, as were all the other buildings he’d seen, but had a short flight of steps up to a porch and the entrance. When Book reached the top step, the doors opened and a young woman with a glass of water came out to meet him.

“Here, Shepherd. It’s a bit warm today,” she said as she gave him the glass and escorted him into the building. She took Kaylee’s parasol and closed it carefully, placing it on a shelf by the door. “Real pretty parasol, Shepherd. Please, sit down and rest a bit. We can wait.” Once Book sat down where she indicated, next to a table holding a pitcher of water, she passed through a door at the back of the room.

Surprised at such courtesy on a back-water moon, Book leaned back in the chair and sipped his water. It was cool, cooler than he’d expected, as was the room he was in. “Ah, Derrial,” he sighed. “Shouldn’t pass judgments on someplace by how it looks. You know that. This place may be isolated, but it’s definitely not without its pleasantries.”

When Book had rested and enjoyed the fresh water and quiet, both of which were in short supply on Serenity and something he’d had a hard time getting used to after the abbey, he got up and began looking around. He’d barely made it across the room to admire a painting on the far wall when the young woman returned. “Are you ready,

Comments
Friday, 04 November 2005 17:32
This really is it for a little while. These last two sections gelled quite nicely, but the rest is still stewing and I probably won't get a chance to put anything down "on paper" over the weekend.

Sorry, Tranquility. Seems my brain has issues with longer pices.
Friday, 04 November 2005 17:33
Gack! Pieces, not pices.
Friday, 04 November 2005 17:43
Thats ok. My brain has issues too... not really anythng specific, just... issues :D Verynice peice!
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 04 November 2005 17:45
It's very sad that there'll be a longer wait now. I adored this part. You did a great job capturing Book's quiet sense of humor and the situation was just perfect for him! Hee!

Flaherty continues to amuse me. Gotta love a person even more cheerful than Kaylee, and suspiciously so, too.

Looking forward to more, whenever that may be!
Friday, 04 November 2005 17:49
I loved this part, the way you took the time to describe Book arrival and the way he is welcomed. It gave us the time to enjoy the moment too
Thank you
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 04 November 2005 19:55
Very nice, I had to smile at Book and all those baptisms not to mention the re-marrying of folk to keep it more proper! Ali D :~)
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