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Crop Circles -- Three

Wednesday, November 2, 2005

Jobs and envelopes

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Mal welcomed Mr. Flaherty back onto Serenity. He was surprised at the change in the man. For three weeks he’d barely spoken. Now he was all smiles and wouldn’t stop talking.

“Captain Reynolds, you have not idea how difficult my trip with you was.” Flaherty grabbed Mal’s hand and pumped it vigorously.

“I’m sorry to hear that, Mr. Flaherty. We’re no cruise ship, but we do try to make our passengers comfortable.” Mal was beginning to worry about working with this man. His exuberance was overwhelming. Mal was sure the combination of this man and the heat outside would be the death of him.

“Oh, no! Don’t apologize. It wasn’t you or your ship, which is a nice one if you don’t mind my saying.” Flaherty could barely contain himself. His eyes danced around, looking at everything. If he’d been a child, he would have been skipping. “It was my own, self-imposed silence that was nearly the end of me.”

Mal led Flaherty to the galley. He hoped Flaherty would sit down and explain what he wanted, in that order. That brief stint in the heat had affected Mal more than he had thought, and he really needed to sit down. To his relief, Flaherty plopped down in a chair at the table. Mal settled into a chair across the table from him.

“Captain Reynolds, I spent the last three weeks observin’ you and your crew. You were recommended to me for this job, but I needed to check you out for myself.” Flaherty shifted in his chair and Mal was afraid he would get up and start pacing. Instead, he leaned forward and continued. “We have product that needs to be delivered to a few customers and we’d like you to carry it.”

Pleased that they had finally started talking about business, Mal sat back and crossed his arms. “That won’t be a problem. I’m sure we can accommodate you.”

Flaherty stopped moving and looked Mal in the eye. “Without Alliance paperwork.”

Mal blinked. First, that phrase usually led to trouble. Second, he wasn’t interested in trouble right now. “There was a time I’d take a job offer l

Comments
Wednesday, 02 November 2005 18:41
This is where I stalled before the movie came out. I'm working on the rest, so the next installment may take a little while.
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 02 November 2005 19:39
LOL! This is good! I love Flaherty, he's so adorable and the fact that he can irritate Mal in a way that Mal usually does to others... well, it's verrrrrry amusing!

You have a great handle on all the characters. I hope the next part doesn't take too long. :)
ANONYMOUS
Wednesday, 02 November 2005 19:48
Really liked it , this Flaherty character being quite intriguing, I wonder what is next in store for them. And this night on the town, would it mean troubles? I hope :)thanks
Thursday, 03 November 2005 17:02
I want to know who recommended Mal and his crew to Flaherty and whether it is just me that read a veiled threat when he alluded to knowing who River and Simon were. And the envelopes for Wash and Book made me think of the quote, "Beware Greeks bearing gifts". I'd like to think the man is on the up but will be keeping one eye on him just in case. Shiny story, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 04 November 2005 00:44
^ beware GEEKs bearing gifts... thats when the trouble starts

Tranqility (aka as Proud_gaminggeek in other places XD )
BELLONA
Friday, 04 November 2005 20:47
hee. book with a parasol *laughs*

b
Thursday, 04 November 2010 20:19
I got the feeling there is some interesting of the Chinese kind ahead...

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