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Some things change part 2

Sunday, October 30, 2005

Jayne finds some comfort

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“Wave for you Jayne” said the Captain coming through from the cockpit. “Lady called Darcy” he went on

Jayne stood up quickly and went past Mal. “He left his food” pointed out Simon in amazement.

Not a minute later Jayne was goin’ past again leaving them all staring after him. He passed Kaylee in the corridor without a word.

“Hey” said Kaylee “who upset Jayne?”

“Got a wave, weren’t there more ‘n’ a minute and he was outta there”

They rushed up to the bridge where the wave was still running “Jayne, Jayne, ya there?” the lady was saying

“Jayne left pretty sudden like” said Mal “I’m Malcolm Reynolds, who are you?”

“Captain Reynolds” she nodded. “Jayne’s sister, Darcy. Guess I shoulda expected that reaction. Had to tell him our Ma’s dead.”

“Well tell us where the funeral is, ‘n’ we’ll bring him” suggested Mal

“He cain’t come to the funeral, Jayne knows that.” She replied “he wouldn’ be welcome.”

Mal didn’t like the sound of that “Are you goin’ to tell me why my mercenary ain’t welcome at his own Ma’s funeral?” he demanded

“Nope, ifen he wants ya to know Jayne can tell ya.” She paused “when Ma knew she was dyin’ she made up a box for Jayne. I just wanted to tell ‘im I’ve sent it to Persephone. Can ya tell Jayne that we miss him, and thanks for all the help, I’m goin’ to keep writing.” And she was gone.

The crew was all silent for a moment thinkin’ on what they heard.

“Should we go after him?” asked Inara.

“Best leave him to himself for now” replied Mal “Jayne’s not always welcomin’ at the best of times. And he’s likely to be all upset at the moment.”

“Sometimes people need company Captain.” replied Kaylee.

Man had to be hurtin’. He never talked much ‘bout home and such, but she knew he loved his Ma. Wrote to her all the time, sent her money, wore the presents she sent. “Think I might look for ‘im.”

After searching all through Serenity, she finally found him outside on the planet. First she thought Jayne was just sittin’ next to the cliff next to the ship, but as she got closer Kaylee saw that he

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ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 30 October 2005 19:38
Oh, I really like this!


You have the chrarcters down! Kaylee going after him, Jayne pounding rocks. I love that he not only noticed that Kaylee needed comfort (in the last part) but reached for her whn she found him as well.

I gotta know what happens next:)
Sunday, 30 October 2005 23:06
Poor Jayne, but what in the nine hells did he do that made it so he couldn't go home even for his mother's funeral? Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 02 November 2005 17:29
*sniffle* jayne!

b
Saturday, 05 November 2005 22:36
What did he do? Who did he do it to? Ack, what what what?
Friday, 11 November 2005 15:49
Now you have to tell us why he can't go home. I wonder Kaylee is going to make of her 'squirmings' later.

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