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Flight of Fancy

Sunday, October 30, 2005

River/Jayne. Post-Serenity. What was Jayne planning to do with River before she knocked him out?

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“Weren‘t wrong.”

Jayne startled where he stood in the kitchen, the knife he was using to cut the protein for the evening meal slicing into his thumb. “Gorramit girl! Can’t go on sneaking up on a fella!” He stuck his thumb in his mouth, sucking away the blood, glaring at her the entire time.

“Always thought you looked better in red,” she smiled prettily, gliding silently closer.

His grip on the knife tightened slightly, and he took a step back. “Ain’t wise, little girl.”

Tilting her head, her playful smile slipped into a confused frown as she stared him, and Jayne felt like she was slicing him down the middle and leaving him wide open. Probably was.

“Scared.”

“I ain’t scared ‘o nothing.,” he pointed with the knife.

“Scared of Reavers.”

She reached out, touched the tip of the knife with her finger and he jerked it away, fixing her with another glare. “Aint many of ‘em left once you were done.”

“Scared for Alia.”

He froze, anger lighting his eyes, “Where’d you hear that name?”

Smiling again, she tapped his chest, “Lives here. I like her. ”

“Ya don’t know her,” he growled, his fingers itching to push her away. “An’ I don’t like you gettin’ inside me!”

“Know her like you do. Thick, dark hair you used to wrap around your fist. Tasted like chocolate on your tongue. Her body made you whole. Stopped kissing after.”

“You stop that right now, girl. Or I swear I’ll--”

“She’s safe. Happy,” she pet his arm soothingly. “Don’t fear anymore.”

“I told ya, I ain’t scared. Now git, if you plan on eatin‘ tonight.” He shrugged out from under her touch, going back to the meal.

“Scared of Mal.”

She wasn’t even looking at him anymore, and somehow that was even worse. “Got no reason t’ be scared of the Captain. I could take ‘im in a fair fight.”

“Not scared of fighting. Scared of losing.” She shook her head, smiling faintly again, a wisp of hair drifting gracefully across her face.

“Told ya, I wouldn’t lose.” He growled, hating it when she talked in circles.

“Already

Comments
Sunday, 30 October 2005 10:32
No wonder River scares him, she sees way too much of what the big man hides. And that's mainly what's in his heart. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 30 October 2005 16:40
Well done.
So much of what happens with Jayne and River is non-verbal and you've done beautifully at capturing what they don't say, as well as what they do.
Sunday, 30 October 2005 21:10
*warm fuzzies*

Gawd, I love your Jayne. In everything...even the Jaylee's (sssshhhh, don't go tellin' the rayne_shippers!).
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 30 October 2005 22:11
This is your stalker! Well, one of them. :p AKA Somedeepmystery. You know I liked it already but now I'm announcing it to the world!
Monday, 31 October 2005 08:20
WOW...great stuff, believable and all, although River character is abit off, jaynes perfect, and the idea of jayne breaking down emotionally is very well done
CUB
Tuesday, 01 November 2005 00:15
I was going to say "God I love your Jayne," but then I realized someone's already beaten me to it. So how about "Ditto."
Wednesday, 02 November 2005 17:18
squeeeeeee!!! *big hugs* river-bird and ape-man!!! squeeeeeeee!!!

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ANONYMOUS
Thursday, 03 November 2005 19:32
^ ::holds ears while bellone squees...::

Very nice story. Good River talk, very accurate. I can see it happening.
BEAUTIFOOL
Sunday, 20 November 2005 18:39
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm. that is all.

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