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Whispers in the Air: Part 4

Sunday, January 4, 2004

After Book leaves with the Alliance, Serenity is faced with some Reavers

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"To my crew, Please do not follow me." Zoe listens to the static filled message by herself in her room. "Zoe," Mal's voice continues. "I'm leaving Serenity in your hands. I guess y'all made it down to New Melbourne, you're listenin' to this..."

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One Hour Ago...

Once Mal realized that Broder's push only theft them out on the edge of atmo, he got an idea. Kaylee took engine connection tubes for a shuttle to do some mis-matched repairs. Simon reluctantly locked Traves and River in the infirmary for their own safety. While Jayne, Zoe, and Mal prepared for the worst. Wash was ordered to lock himself in the Bridge with Simon. And Kaylee had to do the same thing while in the engine room. Wash didn't want his wife to be fighting any Reavers, but he did as he was told.

The Reaver's ship wasn't much bigger than Serenity, in fact it was a modified Firefly that had alot out outer hull patch work. With a strong electromagnetic field net, the Firefly pulled Serenity in, and docked with her. Mal, Zoe, and Jayne stood guard, ready to fire, in the cargo hold. Wash monitered Serenity's vitals, while Simon tracked Broder's ship. Kaylee welded on the second to last piece, with a notion of something is going to happen. Traves, sits next to River's unconscious body, hoping she will wake up soon.

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"Look at them, Shepherd." Broder smiles sadistically, watching the moniters. "Have you encountered any Reavers, Shepherd? I bet you have. With living on the Rim for nearly a year." Broder turns to Book, whose standing next to a door, with his hands cuffed together. "I'm sure they're putting up a fight." he laughs. "It's too bad, I can't hear their screams."

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The airlock door opens with sparks flying. The loud grinding squeal of the door comes to a stop, when the door is fully open. In pounces three beast like creatures. All of them covered in black ash and engine grease. Their teeth are yellow and razor sharp. Their eyes are filled with red blood. The two bald ones are male, while the one with dre

Comments
Sunday, 04 January 2004 22:06
Oh wow, don't leave it like this! How the gorram is Mal going to get out of this one? Gulp. Rutting hell, we need the next part - now! Excellent, very exciting and with the atmosphere building nicely. Keep going but soon, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 06 January 2004 01:56
Please! A next part!
ANONYMOUS
Sunday, 15 January 2006 04:56
Could use a _lot_ of spell-check and a little plot work. Not bad, though
Saturday, 13 January 2007 23:22
Good plot here. I've only read this one part. I'd agree with the spell check issue and (gently) suggest a beta reader, but I still got what you were trying to say. Keep writing, I like it.

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